Man this story was beautiful. Well done. I really liked it. :)

I thought this was rather tasteful. I'm glad you decided to explore this aspect of your farmworld continuity

(Sniff) That was just beautiful. I have little more to say other than how you keep proving your incredible skill in writing these two destined lovers. The strength and dedication of your fics has touched many of us readers and have sparked the birth of our own stories, including mine.

I'll take this moment to thank you for all that you've offered to this site and our hearts.

The "love scene" was so thick with passion that you could cut it with a knife, serve it to friends and still have enough to put in the fridge. The ending was just so sweet. I always wanted to read a m-rated adventure time story from you.

Wow, is this your first time writing an M-rated fic? 'Cause it was friggin' AWESOME!
Oh, and guess what? REACTION TIME IS NOW BACK ON TRACK!
- The beginning sounds innocent enough...
- Oh wait...
- DOWN BONER, DOWN!
- Ah whatever...
- Mhhmm...
- Mmmmm...
- Mmmmmmmmm...OH SHOOT!
- NO FINN! SHE CAN TAKE THE PAIN! JUST GO ON!
- NOOOOO!
- AAARGH!
- At least my boner's down.
- Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww...
- AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW...
- Okay, enough fluff.
- Ooooooohhhhh...
- YES! YES! YES!
- AW GOD DANG IT!
- One of the reasons I hate Nature.
- Again with the awww's...AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
- *deep breath* Well, that's it. What do you expect? For some kind of cowboy to jump in and annoy the hell out of me like one did in my fanfics?
Cowboy: YIPPIE!
Me: T_T
Anyways, can you PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEE EEEE continue The Awakening of Heroes!? PPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS SSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE?

*Grita, salta, vuelve a gritar, brinca, se convierte en SS4, grita y brinca, trasciende las barreras físicas y metafísicas con alegría*

Wooooooooohooooooooooooo! Yeah! I have the biggest grin EVER in my face! I can't stop laughing! My heart is full of pure happiness! Who could tell I will inspire the great SCIK1012?

Don't worry if this fics are not "your type" because you did it great! Awesome! We need more of this kind of Ms. So beautiful, so pure, so lovely and cute! Of course, the spicy jokes are there hehehehe. Oh my, you write M so well!

Poor Finn, cut in the "little dead", that's cruel hahahaha. But, with something like that, anyone would cut himself; that's the last thing you want to see while you are dancing the waltz of love. I adore Flanna's understanding; I don't think it's okay to bare with that but... *sigh* the force of love. Oh, Flanna, you kinky! You know? TAU:A is more agnsty after this... they just want to be like rabbits! Hahahahaha Milli doesn't care. For her, her dad is a complete man.

Cute, lovely, very detailed :) A great, awesome, mathematic, rombus, (spicy)... AGH! Adjectives, where are you when I need you? Increíble, chingon, cachorriluviacorniofantastico! (adjetivo creado por Striker). I love it, I love it, I love you! I'm eager to see another M from you (no pressure, but they both are great).

All the universe's blessings for you! See you soon!

This story...Is F***ing Amazing! The detail, the story itself the moral all fantastic!

My god. Its so cute. So sweet i cant endureit. You are really good at this. Every time you update Amarath it makes my day. I would gladly make you a longer rewiew but im writing in my blue and its a nightmare. Keep going.

SEE YA!

I liked your story, but I feel sorry for "Finn" in this story, and he does not know at this time the serious illness of his wife.

That damn disease, which will prevent you from having those children he loves.

And when you rate something M, you mean it, and I can definitely see that, this one was a bit more 'it', but also a lot more meaningful and beatiful and... I guess the knowledge of the future also help reduce the focus on it, I actually got a bit sad while thinking of it...

But nevermind that, piece by piece: Part 1 is really, really good, not straight out 'it', and meaningful enough to be great in that sense, is just... lovingly awesome, if that counts as an expression. Part 2 really gets to you, with Finn just realizing Flanna is getting a bit harmed by his arm, it can really break someone's heart... but it didn't stay like that for long, Flanna's word and reminiscing, it really doesn't seem that bad when you think about it, and that makes it all the more meaningful, and this is already full of meaning, so that's saying something. Part 3... alright, even if Nature sorta lost the game here once, it really loves to be a bitter loser, with that lightning and all. Joke's on her though, Milli there just made the already-sweet moment even more sweet, and for that I applaud you.

Even with M-rated stuff not exactly being your cup or tea, the area you're the most specialized in, you never dissapoint, not one bit, I loved this one shot, great job Sunchi!

So, beautiful...

I love you concluding thoughts at the end, and the fact that you didn't go into graphic detail, lemon story's like that are so uninteresting...

Are you out of writers block for awekening I heroes yet? I have been dying for another chapter. Best of luck to ya!