i like the inuyasha and kouga relationship...i hope you come back and update though! what happened at the tournament?
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I very much look forward to the next chapter _

Ok so not often that I do this, but I would like to know more about Inuyasha and Kikio. Cant ever spell her name right. Are Sesshomaru and Inuyasha brothers in this one? I would hare to see them fight.

This story is so good I hope u will continue it and update soon. I love how u have all the people displayed and how they all fit into there parts if u do happen to have inuyasha run away again can u show how he does it and the fight that ensues to bring him back thank u and keep up the amazing work

Very good story! I seriously love it.

My thing for this is, a littl minor spelling mistakes but I know how that is. Other then that your plot is good, you ideas are good and the characters are mostly IN character! Your story is absolutely amazing!

I can't wait for the moment that Kagome and Inuyasha get a secret moment alone? Maybe after a first win? wink wink

I LOVE THIS! I immediately started re-watching all of the episodes of Spartacus (that show is my freakin shit!) I love you for combining two awesome shows in a great and interesting way and I can't wait to see what comes next!

Great work so far, loved the new chapters! I think that the character relationships have all been well though out and I love how everyone interacts with each other thus far! Kagome's idea to punish Yash via his senses instead of with phtsical violence was inspired! I know she clearly didn't want to do it, but at least she thought of a way that didn't cause more harm to Yash than necessary, so that's good! I also liked how Ayame got Kogua to agree to coach Inuyasha! Not only did she make valid points, but now Yash has someone to train him, whether willingly or not! Didn't care for the "relationship" between Bank and Kag's too much, but I am very excited to see how it affects things in the long run! Especially once Inu starts getting attached to Kags cause it should lead to some very amusing moments! As for characters I might like to see/hear from, I guess I have a few ideas, though feel free not to listen to anything you don't like, this is your story, not mine! :)

First of all, people will likely hate me for this, but I've kinda always hated Shippo! He's just seemed extremely bratty and disrespectful to me! He's always taken pleasure in pissing off Inuyasha, yet ALWAYS gets away scott free while Inu gets punished instead. Sure Inuyasha's the adult, but there's only so much a person can do to hold in their anger before they've been pushed over the edge and since anger management isn't Yash's strong point from the get go, something Kagome and Shippo know all too well, it's drastically unfair that Shippo's bratty, childish behavior goes unpunished all the time! Not only that, but he's always seemed SO jealous of Inu and Kag's relationship! It's like every time Inu's getting attention from Kagome Shippo deliberately steps in and makes Yash seem like the bad guy, effectively turning Kagome's attention onto Shippo and usually resulting in Inu getting punished or scorned by Kagome while the kit just taunts him further every time Kagome turns her head. OK, I know long rant, but it boils down to this: I usually hate it when Shippo gets put into a story! Light involvement is OK, but as a main character I can't help but always think that he fits the role of antagonist way better than protagonist! I can just see him better as a bad guy or henchman than acting like a "sweet, innocent, little kid" which everyone always wants to make him out to be! Besides, it's like people forget that he's a demon! Sure he looks young, but in reality we've never been told how fast fox kits age and mature. Realistically Shippo could be in his 20's, 50's, 90's or maybe even over 100 and we'd never know for sure. Inuyasha's only a hanyou and he's 200 years old, Shippo, as a full demon, could very well age at an even slower rate that that! If you think of it that way, then Inuyasha's punishment's might be well justified cause the kit really should know better then to pull a lot of the crap he does considering how it would mean he's technically no where near being the baby Kagome seems convinced he is! Anyway, that's just my take on Shippo, take it for what you will, hate me if you want, but you asked for opinions and his character's just always irked me so I figured I'd throw in my viewpoint.

Second, I'd definitely love to see Sesshomaru making an appearance! I know he will anyway, being a champion and all, but it be interesting to see if he and Inuyasha know they're brothers, assuming they still are in this story! From their I could see it leading to so many possibilities ranging from an extra ferocious battle between the two to maybe a possible alliance or something! They're are a lot of possibilities and I'd love to see how they'll interact! As for other characters, depending on Sesshy's level of involvement in the story maybe an older Rin or Kagura could make an appearance? I honestly like the idea of either girl with Sesshomaru, so I've never cared too much about who he ends up with. As for hearing more from one character or another, who's already in the story...that's a bit tougher. Usually I primarily enjoy Inu and Kag's perspectives overall, for obvious reasons, but I'm not sure if there's anyone else in particular I'd want to hear from. It might be interesting to get Kagome's grandfather's take on things from time to time, or maybe briefly hearing from her mothers or Souta' and getting their opinions would be cool, but other than that I can't really think for anyone I particularly want to hear from! You've been doing a great job incorporating the characters and their thoughts into the story thus far and I don't really feel like it's lacking input from any particular character at the moment!

Omg lived this chapter it made me laugh so hard i started chocking on my cup of tea n the "shit pit" that was great lol _

The brotherly love between Inuyasha and Koga is just too funny and definitely brings such a light feeling to such a dark subject.

*sniffle * why isn't there another chapter out yet :"(
Really good. Very different from anything I've read so far. Very few spelling/grammar errors and I was surprised quite a lot. Keep up the great work and please please pleeeaaasee update soon!
**** out of *****
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After reading the first part of Inuyasha in chapter 2 I was hoping that he was having a vision of his future with Kagome; sadly I'm deeply depressed that it was actually his past with Kikyo... wondering how all this will turn out now if the story is basically Kagome/Inuyasha.

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh so excited with the update! thank you

I like how there's more than just two major characters, it makes a story more interesting because of how their lives intersect. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Wow, I feel the connection in this story, I like it.