omg this should be continued. It's such a cute start.

Nice and cute representation of the pair's possible interactions with one another, would be nice to see it further fleshed out instead of just the one scene, because the new thoughts of the possibilities of this pair are too great.

One shot romantic fanfiction like this but I would love to see this turned into a multiple chapter work

I really liked this I have always been a sucker for fluffy

I read the disclaimer and instantly felt sad. RIP Monty

Daaaaaaaaawwww!

*ded*

Aww. This was really cute!

Very cute, there is not enough of Awkward Rabbit shipping, so this was a nice read.

love it, please make more, this is a grand work

Neat little one shot.
Keep it up. Laters.

bro, you need to make this into a full story. that would make my life complete. that and when hollywood would make a decent reboot

well this was nice.

id love to see a sequel of this where they start hanging out and maybe get together

I don't know how many times I've read this small fic, but every time... Damn it hits something right on the head. Found it a two years ago, read it maybe 10 times and every time. The emotions you stir up with this short piece are amazing, thank you very much for writing it.

Write more of this ship. Please. I desire more. Velvet desires more. Jaune... Is probably okay with Pyrrha, honestly, but he's the goofball so he doesn't get to choose. MORE YELLOW VELVET!