This is a cute story. Loved it!

I liked it so much. It's really sweet, and both characters been shy Is just beautiful.

Shy Elizabeth is almost as attractive as impertinent Elizabeth.

a cute fast paced story. I really enjoyed it

I just reread this and enjoyed it just as much as the first time. A nicely done short story.

Wonderful! Thank you.

What a fun story. It’s not very common to move Lizzy to the shy side, as most of the time we move her even more Lizzy than Lizzy. Very nice, low angst story, fun story.

Enjoyed your story. Couple of wrong homonyms usage, but spell check doesn't catch them. fir - fur, seen - scene. A quiet and sedate Lizzy is hard to imagine, but Darcy still was drawn to her. I wonder who the anonymous was - could Darcy finally got tired of the scoundrel? Good story.

This is a cute little story. Well done!

Really cute !

Funny

Nice.

Thank you for sharing your story with us. I found it well written, and even if it was really ooc for Elizabeth I enjoyed it very much ! They're too cute really :)
Have a nice day and keep going !

It was a delightful tale. Thank you for sharing it with us.

a very lovely story.