Beautiful

Aww, this was really sweet! I love the level of detail you get into, especially the way you describe Maka's emotions!

Really good and well written! Will you be continuing this?

Oh jees... That is perfect! I love how Soul understands Maka's issue with his scar

Ahahaha you smutty person you!

No, I kid, this was wonderful! Usually I don't like stories as much when Soul and Maka are already together, but this was just wonderful I love this. There's so many feels, and yet it's not overdone, because you let Maka have all the insecurities that she should do without everything getting completely out of whack. Well done. So amazing. Ah yay!