| Reviews for Breaking Out |
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reminiscingguest chapter 28 . 5/26 in memory of the avatar coming to netflix rereading this fic brought back so many memories! hope you can continue writing it! |
suibian chapter 28 . 5/17 hopefully you’ll have the inspiration and motivation to write again! |
Writing.Ragdoll chapter 1 . 5/18 Woooooooooooooowowowowoo I binged this in one day- the tension was so real! It was so good! Thank you for writing this! |
BrunetteBeauty14 chapter 10 . 5/10 I love the story so far. The concept is amazing, I've always loved Zuko with a waterbender. I will say though just as a fellow creator you might want to keep in mind how long it takes to heal burns. For instance, when Zuko burned Toph's feet. Katara couldn't fix it in one go. I can see how if it wasn't a bad burn though, Asuni could fix it on her own in one go. I look forward to reading more. |
nomercy58 chapter 28 . 5/6 Wow, missed this story so much, had to do another read through. Would love to see a continuation at some point. |
StarOfTime chapter 9 . 4/17 I'm really enjoying this, and just wanted to point out a minor inconsistency. Asuni states that every identifying feature about her is hidden in her get-up, yet Zuko calls her a mysterious girl in his head. This creates an inconsistency. He should probably have referred to her with a gender neutral term, such as figure, or person, or a masculine term, as she can't be identified as female on sight. Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing! |
Dally'sTUFF chapter 28 . 4/14 This is such a well written fic and I would be so sad to see it without an update hopefully there could be one in the future |
FireRaider363 chapter 28 . 4/2 I usually don't comment but I had to add my voice to those petitioning for more, maybe if you have some time you and write a bit?... please? hopefullyThis is honestly the best I've read of OC ATLA fanfics and I really hope you don't drop it |
Night.Wing52 chapter 28 . 3/22 Please update :( this is the best Zuko/Oc story I’ve read! definitely worth reading |
Luxord's Xigbar chapter 28 . 3/18 Here's hoping you continue to update! Love the story and all you've done with it |
JackieMishaFrost chapter 28 . 2/2 I hope you will consider continuing this story. It is really good. ️ |
nikisha chapter 28 . 11/23/2019 who else loves this story...and is still waiting for its completion...for years... |
SebatadeS chapter 28 . 9/4/2019 This is very fun to read. It follows the plot well in its own way and is very well written. |
Mogor chapter 13 . 4/14/2019 Update this story please. its been long time you write more chapters of this very great and amazing story. Please update. |
dreamerwithapen chapter 28 . 3/3/2019 Oh my word... this story is AMAZING! I just spent the past two days binge reading it, and I can’t get over how incredible your writing is; Asuni is SO BADASS AND COMPLEX AND I ADORE HER! And her and Zuko absolutely kill me (in the best way possible, I LOVE a good slowburn) You write the canon characters so well that I forget that I’m reading a fanfic and not watching the actual show lol (Also, the Asuni x June bromance is everything I never knew I needed) This is... BY FAR... the best ATLA fanfic that I’ve read. I love how you’ve added a level of maturity to it that the show couldn’t do because well... it’s a nickelodeon show so... but anyway, I really appreciate that aspect of this story, it just makes it that much more enjoyable to read. Ugh I better stop talking now, or I’ll just keep ranting about how much I love this story and your character and your writing! |