Reviews for Breaking Out
reminiscingguest chapter 28 . 5/26
in memory of the avatar coming to netflix rereading this fic brought back so many memories! hope you can continue writing it!
suibian chapter 28 . 5/17
hopefully you’ll have the inspiration and motivation to write again!
Writing.Ragdoll chapter 1 . 5/18
Woooooooooooooowowowowoo I binged this in one day- the tension was so real! It was so good! Thank you for writing this!
BrunetteBeauty14 chapter 10 . 5/10
I love the story so far. The concept is amazing, I've always loved Zuko with a waterbender. I will say though just as a fellow creator you might want to keep in mind how long it takes to heal burns. For instance, when Zuko burned Toph's feet. Katara couldn't fix it in one go. I can see how if it wasn't a bad burn though, Asuni could fix it on her own in one go.

I look forward to reading more.
nomercy58 chapter 28 . 5/6
Wow, missed this story so much, had to do another read through. Would love to see a continuation at some point.
StarOfTime chapter 9 . 4/17
I'm really enjoying this, and just wanted to point out a minor inconsistency. Asuni states that every identifying feature about her is hidden in her get-up, yet Zuko calls her a mysterious girl in his head. This creates an inconsistency. He should probably have referred to her with a gender neutral term, such as figure, or person, or a masculine term, as she can't be identified as female on sight.

Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing!
Dally'sTUFF chapter 28 . 4/14
This is such a well written fic and I would be so sad to see it without an update hopefully there could be one in the future
FireRaider363 chapter 28 . 4/2
I usually don't comment but I had to add my voice to those petitioning for more, maybe if you have some time you and write a bit?... please? hopefullyThis is honestly the best I've read of OC ATLA fanfics and I really hope you don't drop it
Night.Wing52 chapter 28 . 3/22
Please update :( this is the best Zuko/Oc story I’ve read! definitely worth reading
Luxord's Xigbar chapter 28 . 3/18
Here's hoping you continue to update! Love the story and all you've done with it
JackieMishaFrost chapter 28 . 2/2
I hope you will consider continuing this story. It is really good. ️
nikisha chapter 28 . 11/23/2019
who else loves this story...and is still waiting for its completion...for years...
SebatadeS chapter 28 . 9/4/2019
This is very fun to read. It follows the plot well in its own way and is very well written.
Mogor chapter 13 . 4/14/2019
Update this story please. its been long time you write more chapters of this very great and amazing story. Please update.
dreamerwithapen chapter 28 . 3/3/2019
Oh my word... this story is AMAZING! I just spent the past two days binge reading it, and I can’t get over how incredible your writing is; Asuni is SO BADASS AND COMPLEX AND I ADORE HER! And her and Zuko absolutely kill me (in the best way possible, I LOVE a good slowburn)
You write the canon characters so well that I forget that I’m reading a fanfic and not watching the actual show lol
(Also, the Asuni x June bromance is everything I never knew I needed)
This is... BY FAR... the best ATLA fanfic that I’ve read. I love how you’ve added a level of maturity to it that the show couldn’t do because well... it’s a nickelodeon show so... but anyway, I really appreciate that aspect of this story, it just makes it that much more enjoyable to read. Ugh I better stop talking now, or I’ll just keep ranting about how much I love this story and your character and your writing!
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