| Reviews for Intertwined |
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ICZYS HOSTAGES OF LOVE chapter 1 . 11/3/2019 its been over tree yrars plz uppdate loving this story |
Guest chapter 5 . 6/18/2015 Tonks is such a dumbass. Shame |
unknown chapter 5 . 4/6/2014 It's April 7th. That's way more than 2 weeks. |
sanbeegoldiewhitey chapter 5 . 2/17/2014 Worst chapter ever. |
spacecatdet chapter 2 . 2/10/2014 Like the story, but have two points you need to fix. 1) The Pound is used in Britain, not the dollar, so I highly doubt they would have anything like a Family Dollar store. 2) While I am only 99% certain on this, I don't think they would have a WalMart either. Might want to fix those unless you have suddenly moved magical Britain to America. |
The God Of War Kratos chapter 5 . 2/9/2014 good luck with writing and i will be anticipating the next chapter |
cerberus321 chapter 4 . 12/10/2013 seems to be a funny story |
Guest chapter 3 . 11/24/2013 I like the plot, but it seems to me that English is not your first language. It is also obvious that you are very young |
Sinclaire Silverfang chapter 4 . 11/23/2013 sweet update cant wait for the next |
Guest chapter 2 . 11/23/2013 This is a good story... But there are a few mistakes. Three actually 1) it is called Pound-land or pound-shop, not dollar store 2) there is no Walmart in Britain, and possible europe, the company ASDA is basically a British Walmart that is owned by them 3) stop saying pounds all the Time, there are other words for it like dosh, cash, wonga and others. Or perhaps just use the common word MONEY |
beatshield chapter 4 . 11/22/2013 Great chapter |
Sakura Lisel chapter 2 . 11/22/2013 I like this story and hope you continue it for as LONG as possible. *lol* but I think you made a mistake in how long its been since Harry's been on the run since FOURTH year. Last chapter said that exactly one year had gone by since Harry ran off, but in THIS chapter there is a line that says 'One month later (October in FIFTH-year)'? If he's been gone for a year or more, should it be his SIXTH year or even his seventh? *lol* |
mwinter1 chapter 4 . 11/22/2013 Awaiting more. |
nymlover chapter 3 . 10/28/2013 good so far well done |
Linda chapter 3 . 10/28/2013 I really love this story and hope to read more soon. |