Ah man so much potential! I'd like to see Jack's pov? Can they see Sandy because of Pitch? What with their powers similarities?

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Awesome story!

Continuuee!

Oh, and also, Danny's POV.

Well that's not... bad... I guess...

"your Christmas happy son"

/wheezing i'm fucking dYING

This is one long delay, please hurry up with that update. Oh, btw I vote for Jack

Love the story so far, pretty intriguing. . If you update again, can it be Jack frost's POV. Nice on all the Christmas, and I was surprised too that the gang could only see the Sandman. Is there gonna be a next chapter, though?

Really enjoy the story. Love the idea of pitch looking
For someone to understand him and making Danny the ideal character to veiw as a son for pitch hope to see more of a father son relationship between the two

Nice story 3

This is such a good story! Though you do take a long time to update, I definitely think the quality of the chapters make up for it! And honestly, I don’t mind if it’s Danny or Jack’s POV, they are both my favourite characters from DP and ROTG. And I’m absolutely fine with you getting rid of Tooth for the moment, I understand how hard it must be to write her, I’ve bever tried, but that’s just because I wouldn’t know how. I’m excited for more!

Love your writing and I would think that it would be really cool to see the next chapter in jacks point of view. Can’t wait to read the next chapter

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE TO WRITE MORE AND UPDATE THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON

I absolutely love this and can't wait for more. I kinda wanna see Jack just because it's been a while since we've had his PoV.

plez update

this is glorious...