Pretty good for a Fanfiction.

Is it really ongoing? If it is'nt then please say so. Also fix a little of your grammar.

Ahhh, such a nice ending to it, too!

I'm glad you made Accelerator and Mikoto date each other-That's one of my favorite pairings.

As for the story all together, it was really, really, well done.

Can't wait for the new story!

Nice fanfic, like the way the way the science and magic side interact.
I get a feeling that Ollerus, Fiamma and Touma haven't shown their full power yet. I doubt Ollerus could die against an awakened esper, he could fight Othinus for a while, he's a monster.

Loved the chapter! I didn't like that you took the action off the main plot but this prequel was pretty damn cool, Aomi's story seems a lot like Accelerator's in canon what with the whole "young child hunted by military", I'd like to see what ends up happening to her.

This story's sweet you should update more often

I literally have no words to describe how amazing this chapter was. I am very excited for the next chapter, and I will wait for it to come out. I look forward to reading more.
-Cyril

Wow what a fantastic story! I think all the characters are fantastic and there is a palpable excitement as the story reaches its climax, I hope to see more.

Kakine Teitoku is a serious cocky son of a bitch, if he thinks he can really beat Accelerator in a all out fight. XD. After seeing how badly he lose to Accelerator, I will never believe he could win without dying as well.

Alright! So Fiamma Of The Right vs Misaka and slightly OP Touma... Awesome! And Ollerus still the wild card. But now that Accelerator knows the Magic side doesn't completely trust each other, I'm wondering if that will play in later chapters. With the Monsters of magic on the move and only one Level 5 left in Academy City. So much to specualte on and I know the future battles are going to be awesome! I also think you nailed Fiamma perfectly, with his everlasting smile and aura of smugness. I look forward to more and good luck with your exams and stuff!

Okay now im really excited! Just how strong is Kamijou Touma in this AU? strong enough to tie with an almost magic god? And Ollerus and full powered Fiamma working together! Im loving this more and more!

Not bad. I'll definitely keep reading.

This was a very good action-filled chapter. I can't wait for the next!
-Cyril

Oh Yeah! I was waiting for this chapter! I love your version of the Invasion of Academy City. So many moving parts. Great character conflicts. Now GREMLIN is here, Before WW3? So I guess He's just by himself right? So are the churches working together? Or is God's Right Seat working independently from the Roman Catholic Church and Anglican Church? Kamijou Touma and Sogiita Gunha are the biggest mystery for me. Why are they working for Aliester Crowley and Laura Stuart respectively? All in all a great chapter and now I have even more inspiration to finish my latest chapter!
Good work and as always, I look forward to seeing more!

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Crashing out!

Yay even more actions! I can't wait to see how the fights will turn out with the level 5 now all involved and being in the core of it! and I totally agree with your point of view: if the level 5 were friendly in the real Toaru verse, they wouldn't be exactly how they were portrayed in the novel, I just wish that there were more interactions between them in the original plot though. They deserve more focus than just Touma going around punching people XD Seriously the level 5 fighting abilities are just so much more interesting to watch than a punch (but no offense to Touma's fans here). Can't wait for the next chapter!