It's a great fiction. The plot is interesting and original, the narration is well-written.

Kudos!

That was a long wild ride, talk about emotional. Very well done and thank you

I really wish that ritual existed in real life.

very create

Tease.

I don't think I've ever been so annoyed at a Harry I placed in the position of protagonist... at this point, I am sadly past understanding and kind of just want to hit him in the head and have him switch places with Snape or Malfoy for bit...

Took forever to read. Wish the ending was set further in future with them happy together.. Good visuals and descriptions in story.

I haven't even read this yet. I had clicked at random between this one and another one that I thought sounded good without looking at the title or writers name and not two sentences in and I already know your the one who wrote this and that I am most likely going to like this

please wright more! this is the greatest thing i have ever read in my life and i cant get enough of it

.god. i just! NEEDD! MORE! please is there any way you can continue with this story? any way? pleasssssssssseee

I was expecting this to have that really super romantic scene and then evolve into the eventual sex like in your other stories. And then that didn't happen. Surprisingly and pleasantly i'm not at all bothered by that. A unique and fitting ending for a unique story. I loved it.

I got half way through this chapter but I'm having a hard time grasping concept and following. Sry I won't be finishing it.

...I wonder what happened to Harry? What kind of bond is it and why did it react that way?

Started reading this story and I find it interesting and unique, but I'm having a bit of trouble with your writing style. The words and the phrases used are complicated and I need to stop reading and search the dictionary... O_O