lol awesome. i think this is the third time reading this without knowing xD

Aww poor Mello xD
Please do another chapter ...Please?

Hahahaaa ! Dude ! That was hilarious ! Poor Mello xD nice fic !

Nooo, Why would you stop there! Haha, I feel like me and L were on the same train of thought. I was like, okay...now...more please. haha. Ah. I loved the pick up lines; I want to use that randomly in an anatomy lab. Just to watch the reactions. Heh.

...ahh...darn Mello.
Good job, you have me laughing at the end.
Aia

please please please contiue, i want to know what mello says/does! pweet pwease?

I'd love if you continued this to show how Mello would react to that scene xD

I can't put into words how much I enjoyed this