Awesome!

Awesome story! I really wish this was made into an episode. Lighting Dust was one of my favourite characters, and I wish she had reformed.

This should've been an episode.

Seriously, it was perfectly in-tune to how the episodes usually play out, and the dialogue and character interaction were very good overall!

This was a cool story. I wish that something like this had happened in Wonderbolts Academy. (I wish that there was at least some closure since I highly doubt Lightning Dust would get kicked out for something that she AND Rainbow Dash were guilty of. Not to mention the fact that The Mane Six shouldn't have shown up in the first place.) I always thought Lightning Dust was pretty cool and this fits her situation and personality very well. Great work.

-TheGoldenYoshichu

It was good!

What an awesome story. :D I am glad things worked out in the end, but man Lightning Dust made a huge mistake and Rainbow Dash was beyond amazing, she was willing to go out with Lightning Dust, even out of the academy. Even thought Lightning Dust is second best, as long as Rainbow Dash is first, she can live with it. :) Great job. :D

Very well written and kept IC. I enjoyed reading your story, my hat is off to you sir/ma'am.