This is an amazing work.
I have to ask though, given that you haven't updated it in about six years, are you OK?

This is amazing, can you please update?

Hey man, your fick is awesome, I really liked the fact that Ashs first pokemon was the spearrow he pissed off in the series, I hope you continue this soon

I really, really like this fic. This is a breath of fresh air, due to so many pokemon fanfics having poor grammar and punctuation, Mr Perfect Ash, an Ash that might as well be an OC, or the writer imposing his or hers will on Ash that it becomes a self insert.

Now, I'm not saying the grammar and punctuation is perfect, but it's alot more readable than 70% of pokemon fanfics.

I just love it when Ash thought his journey was over before it began, really pulled my heartstrings.

I don't what to say anymore; due to not wanting to spoiling too much.

I just hope you'll return soon.

Looks good, I don't remember ever reading a fic where Ash doesn't get a pokemon, so good choice. Please continue!

interesting story.
i ask myself how ash travel will work without pikachu, i never see a fic where ash take his travel illegaly (you need a id and pokedex to subscribe any tournament, maybe you could plan oak send the pokedex directly on a pokecenter like pewter city or cerulean city).
Ash will catch very rare pokemon and will stay arceus chosen one?

Could you write a note if this story is discontinued? It's kind of annoying to read a good story just to realize that it'll never be completed.

I like this choice of a starter. Fearow has a rather impressive potential movepool if you go with every move he can learn from all sources. The quality of this chapter was great, and the fight gives me hope for great ones in future.

This looks extremely interesting... I have to keep reading, but the addition of Yellow amuses me. I love that brat! ;)

Looking forward to see what Ash catches.

This is great

I approve of Fearow!

I 3 the desperate fight for survival that just occurred an hope that it happens more in the future and I distinctly 3 the fact that his starter is now a fully grown Pokemon.

This is truly a work of art and I hope that you'd update soon.

"I will be the strongest trainer there ever was: a Pokémon Master!"

With his attitude, the most he can hope to achieve is mediocrity.

very interesting first capture,imagine round 2 with Arbok if it become his second Pokémon what an interesting situation would be in.