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So true! Thanks for making an honest story and showing how they improved their physical relationship. Thanks for sharing this with us and keep on writing.

This was uber cute and funny.

Adorable and hilarious!

-mississippimudpiecraves

Hahaha I laughed so hard, you really did a good job! it was very cute, sexy and funny!

You definitely captured some of the awkward moments of their first time with this. Going on to see what becomes of them and how they can look back and laugh at the improvements on things was a good way to keep things in a good light.

XD That memory made me laugh so hard... And they seemed pretty in character for the whole thing.

Wow...
Foreplay...
Love skikatema pairing..
Thank you for writing...

I loved this fic. I thought that you did a great job at writing a "first time" fic for ShikaTema that was realistic while still being absolutely hilarious. I hope to read more from you in the future!

aw my cheeks are burning. I feel like I peeped at someone's bedroom and caught them doing it but I couldn't turn away.

Loving shikatema more and more!

GC

Nice!

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I love this couple, too gotta say it's defs one of my favs in the naruto fandom ;) there's so many! Haha great writing! Like the flashback how you compared it to their first time :)