Oh wow! This is such an amazing and intense story that reads just like watching an episode of the show.

The way you capture the characters is wonderfully done & you have me hooked. I remember reading the beginning of this story years ago & upon delving back into the fandom am delighted to have found that you have continued.

Absolutely amazing work, sincerely hope you continue to update this story no matter how long it is between posts. Bravo!

I really love this story. You mentioned before that you already wrote more chapters. Are those uploaded on another fanfic page? Please update soon!

Love it! Hilarious that Parker and Sam have to play couple. I wonder if Evan is Parkers and Jarods.
Off to the last chapter

Really nice again! I just wonder one thing: Leo and Virgo were 12 and 14 in the other chapters, now 14 and 16. I thought Cancer was 16.

Awesome story so far. I love the characterisation of the Clones. I just returned to the Pretender Universe after a decade or more and also restarted on my fanfic again. The idea that Gemini was a prototype we habe in common.
I so hope you'll upload the next chapters soon. Well, 3 more to go

Cool! An update! Nice to see the gang back again. Thanks!

Yay! I'm so happy to see a new chapter. :D Thank you for writing more! I know I've enjoyed your fics so much over the years, and it's wonderful to see this one continued.

I had to run my mind back over what was happening outright but I think I remember all of it. All of the parts are moving along nicely and I love how the two boys with Markham are boggling his mind with what their lives were like. I do have to confess I'm leery of Miss Parker and Sam in such close company, especially pretending to be husband and wife (I see them as potential sibling-like relationships but I have a hard time seeing them as a romantic partnership), but that is, of course, your prerogative as a writer to decide on. Zoe's like a loose cannon - you have to wonder what she'll end up doing and how dangerous she'll actually be to Jarod when it's all said and done. From experience reading your other fics, I know it's quite possible to end up with favorite characters dead by the end, so reading them is always a "hold onto your seats and hope everyone makes it" experience. :)

Thank you again for updating! :D I look forward to future updates, when it works for you to write more.

I like where you have brought this story. I just found this story, so I know I'm a new reader, but I hope you can find the motivation to finish it! None of your other stories have featured all the good guys working toward the same goal like this one does. We readers are still here!

hey!
first of all, thank you to keep posting the chapters it means a lot to me!
I just got into the fandom after rewatching the tv show and I love your stories!
It helps me to find closure at this story, and you are really talented. You seem to inderstand each characters and their relashionships with the others. Plus you wrote great plots that are believable and well written!
I really enjoy reading your story and now I'm gonna wait until you post the rest of the story!
I'm sorry I can't write you anything else because my english is not great and reading help me improving that as well!
take care and I hope to read you soon!

Ooh boy… there is definitely danger all around. I'm really hoping this doesn't end up a Miss Parker/Sam fic - but I know you do tend to play around with the pairings some. (I must admit that Miss Parker/Jarod are an OTP for me - but I'll read to the end at least once, whatever you do with it. Further re-reads tend to depend heavily on the pairing therein.)

I'm now worried for Sydney, and hoping Angelo gets to everyone in time, and that Cancer finds a way to escape, and … yeah. Definitely looking forward to seeing what happens next! (Good writing as always, enjoyed it despite the suspense.)

This Made my Day! ! A wonderful New chapter that i am so thankful for because it is simply amazingly written. Awesome!

What a wonderful delight to find notice of an update in my email today.
Evan being a typical hurt child.
Gasp, looks like Sydney will have WAY MORE to do than Jarod knows.
Cancer, Simming does not look good for Sydney either.
Poor Cancer, though not a good way to get a Pretender to work.
Love the apartment scene, grin. And the heart to heart talk between Ms Parker and Sydney.
Grin, Sam calling Catherine, Cat!
Yeap, still here still reading.
Nans

Beautiful! I love this story!
I hope to read the next chapter very soon... :)

Ooooh boy, what an interesting chapter! I'm glad I waited till I wasn't so swamped from the weekend to read it.

Miss Parker as a blonde with wavy hair is just a hilarious mental picture. Oy, Evan's going to take a very long time to fully forgive them all, isn't he… And the intrigue with the Foundation just keeps getting bigger and bigger. Aww, Peter realizes he really has a family now - but I do have to wonder when they will discuss what Horace did in keeping him captive before… And I have to wonder just what situation those two boys are getting into with the intelligence assessment - and who else will discover their existence in the process. So much happening on so many fronts! Looking forward to your next installment, whenever that is. :D

Oh Jarod, this will have to be some pretend! So many pieces in so many places. The scene with Peter and his new family was very touching. Poor Evan! At least his biggest "betrayers" are also his biggest allies and know full well what he's experienced. Wonderfully written as always.