Reviews for This Ain't A Scene
Kesha123 chapter 13 . 5/18/2019
A nice story, really well written but your comment that I would grow a vagina hit me, as if having one is wrong. Please refrain from using such sexist terms or phrases.
twinningbigtime chapter 34 . 5/27/2017
Somgutted to get here and see there's an incomplete sequel :(
Please finish your story or at least put a note some where that it is an incomplete series!
inreverie89 chapter 34 . 9/1/2016
Omg such a fucked up family. Im afraid theyll all contract STD soon. But other than that it was an extremely hillarious story. Definitely made my night. Thanks for writing.
inreverie89 chapter 13 . 8/31/2016
Potter Risks All For Malfoy bahahahah i think you should go work for daily prophets indeed. All chapters are amazing!
inreverie89 chapter 11 . 8/31/2016
Hey I like your Hermione and Albus
inreverie89 chapter 10 . 8/31/2016
Lol I know this is a Scorose fic but I love your version of Weasley clan so much!
Guest chapter 34 . 6/19/2016
Rose and Scorpius are great. I love Lucy, Percy's girls are often plain boring wallflowers because of the perceptions of their Dad. Daemon was great but feel like there's something between him and Lily as well as Lucy and that can't end well. And Albus is messed up. The Potter boys are both messed up, and Sophie is just as bad. It's a trainwreck waiting to happen and explode in everyone's faces.I understand that they have issues because of their parent's celebrity status but they should have also learnt that if they don't behave it's going to make the first page of the Daily Prophet.
I wish you saw more of Louis, Fred and Roxanne. They seem like cool people. Especially Louis, he seems VERY interesting.
Liv chapter 25 . 10/24/2014
Okay so I love this story and I have been obsessivly reading it all day on my horridly long train ride, but I only just realized that Donna's name is Donna Moss. Do you by any chance watch The West Wing? If not you should because it is an awesome show, also there is an amazing character named Donna Moss, so that is who I am picturing as I read this. It kind of actually goes, Al is Josh and Donna is Donna and they are going to have amazing sexual tension filled witty banter and I will by happy
JThawN chapter 34 . 8/25/2014
Started off Great. Had a lot of insight into the characters and their development but during the middle and end seemed rushed without much substance.

Plot lines were brilliant of course but the lack of depth towards the middle/end ruined it for me. That is not to say I didn't enjoy it. I quite enjoyed the fic. I'll commend you on the creativity of the storyline! Well done!
OnceUponAMidnight chapter 34 . 6/5/2014
I really enjoyed reading this story. It was refreshingly canon and kept the adult characters in character (What a concept!). The only problem I had was that you underrated it. I know that is common on this site, but it should definitely be rated M. The description of M rating is as follows:
"Not suitable for children or teens below the age of 16 with non-explicit suggestive adult themes, references to some violence, or coarse language. Fiction M can contain adult language, themes and suggestions. Detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature is considered Fiction MA." I think your work definitely falls into this category. Your work is currently rated T; that description is as follows: "Suitable for teens, 13 years and older, with some violence, minor coarse language, and minor suggestive adult themes." The suggestive themes are beyond "minor".
Guest chapter 34 . 2/10/2014
aaaahh... this was... this was... AWESOME! i just couldn't stop reading!
first i loved everyone but scorpius and rose. then i hated everyone but scorpius and rose and in the end i simply truly loved each and everyone of your characters! and whoah that was amazing - you didn't have me bored for one chapter!
Luc16 chapter 34 . 1/26/2014
ahhhh! i knew it! lol hahaha! i'm glad Lucy and Daemon got together! :D i'm definitely reading the sequel! lol Loved this story! :D
LunaNotLoony chapter 34 . 1/23/2014
Ahhh... I think this chapter really rounded off the story, which was totally amazing, by the way... I loved it.
spannieren chapter 34 . 1/21/2014
Lovely ending :)
xxxLeanniexxx chapter 34 . 1/20/2014
Brilliant
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