Reviews for Fireball
Anda chapter 31 . 4/1
So again, after reading all of your story, I have to say that I find it an easier and more satisfying read than SM’s gender switch book. You worked very cleverly with the characters and the situations to create an alternative universe that is both familiar and new. Saying that, at times I feel that your writing style does not live up to your great ideas and creativity. Still, I am happy you shared your talent with us. Thank you.
Anda chapter 3 . 3/29
I read SM’s gender swap book but so far I like yours better. It is a nice touch that Edward and Alice are siblings in this one too, changes the situation a bit.
Aggie94 chapter 31 . 5/16/2019
Totally PMS all the way. I feel so bad for Jasper. Enjoyed your story enjoyed your twist it was fun to read. Thank you for sharing your words. Meg
sarabo chapter 31 . 4/29/2019
I have enjoyed this story very much! You have changed many things to make it your own. It was a beautiful love story. I think this was your first story and I am trying to read most of them.
RDoster2012 chapter 31 . 4/7/2019
I really enjoyed reading this, I just wish you wouldn't have ended it where you did. But that is just me. I wish you would have added more to the story... What about Bella's graduation? What did they do in their travels? I would have loved to read all that!
Tashakcooks chapter 31 . 3/9/2019
Loved this story! Thank you for sharing!
bunnysue chapter 31 . 3/1/2019
I enjoyed the great read. Thanks.
Sam 'Dimples' Swarek chapter 31 . 2/10/2019
Jasper and pms things is very Plausible. Totally over this.
Zero T chapter 31 . 11/26/2018
Wow what an incredible well written story. Loved it
LAB1 chapter 30 . 7/3/2018
Having Bella's shield will be so perfect for Edward! They are adorable together!
LAB1 chapter 27 . 7/3/2018
Yay! Everything is looking up for Edward's year off!
LAB1 chapter 25 . 7/3/2018
I love this Jasper! I'd love a second story about his life or even just Alice's POV.
LAB1 chapter 23 . 7/3/2018
I can just imagine Emmett's training sessions!
LAB1 chapter 16 . 7/3/2018
So it looks like Jadper will take Alice somewhere remote for her to gain control!
LAB1 chapter 15 . 7/3/2018
Yay Jasper! This is great for cementing Jasper's feelings for Alice, but I'm worried about her prediction that thingswill get worse!
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