Reviews for Love and Deception
indrakshibhandar chapter 16 . 7/15
This is 2020 and I really hope that you are doing well and some day you will finish this story
cinnabear22 chapter 16 . 12/11/2019
This story is so good! Hopefully you can come back and finish it
Sheepra chapter 16 . 3/11/2019
This reminds me of the movie I think it’s called Spilt. I’m excited to see an update
Shanel chapter 16 . 1/29/2019
I can't wait for you to finish...I hope u get to finish it on a nice note. Continue to do you. I'm impatient but I'll have to wait.
Shanel chapter 16 . 1/29/2019
I can't wait for you to fin
Guest chapter 9 . 1/27/2019
Hinata said in the previous chapters that she's not a doormat. But girl she is a door mat. Tsk tsk. Not digging this Hinata at all.
Shes alright i guess chapter 1 . 1/4/2019
Arghh I wanna like this story I really do but I’m so torn on Hinata forgiving Sasuke so easily and using Naruto that way even though I know this is a sashina story from the beginning, and that Naruto is crazy but you can’t really blame him for reacting that way Hinata basically used him and when she wanted to face her fears and work on her marriage she basically used and left Naruto just so she could forget what Sasuke did to her, wished they got together instead now haha even though I love sashina he really didn’t deserve Hinata. Haha anyways rant over good story!
Lady Lavender Blue chapter 16 . 1/1/2019
Lelss. This story reminds me partly of Gone Girl and partly of Split. And I'm following...
Sheepra chapter 16 . 12/31/2018
T.T omg its been so long! Thank you so much
OriSweatshirt chapter 16 . 12/30/2018
I’m so glad you didn’t abandon this story. And the plot just keeps getting better
onlyluna chapter 16 . 12/30/2018
Wow. Suddenly a new plot. Amazing
DAngel7 chapter 16 . 12/30/2018
I'm happy to see that you've got the inspiration and motivation to continue writing and also finish this story. Welcome back!
I've always considered this story one of the more serious SasuHina, heavy but realistic which you can relate to the characters and their situations - dealing with marriage problems, depression, cheating, and the possibility to rebuild your marriage after that and forgive, or that one should sometimes learn to let go. So this magical revelation in this chapter (maybe I've ignored any hints until now) was shocking. On one side I like being surprised and I like the link you've made with the original Naruto - it makes it more magically dramatic - on the other I feel it steals the focus of the serious topic and realism.
Also I think it would be nice if there are page breakers between the different scenes so it's more clear.
Either way.. it's your idea and story, hope you'll update soon.
2plygal chapter 16 . 12/30/2018
Thank you for updating this! I remember reading this awhile back and wondered what would happen to Hinata. I hope Sasuke finds her. I was torn about Hinata forgiving Sasuke so easily but when I read this over, I can understand why she would. He was just in an accident and she thought he might die, so you focus on the present and not the past. Can’t wait for the next update.
nanitaa chapter 16 . 12/29/2018
It’s been soooo long but I’m SOOOOO GRATEFUL AND HAPPY! This is awesome! Hoping for a happy ending!
Jess chapter 16 . 12/29/2018
I really wanted to like the story but it's just kind of annoying how things progressed, I get that Sasuke was in an accident but you never addressed their issues again, I can't realistically see Hinata forgiving Sasuke just like that, he had an affair! A long one! He hasn't even told her the whole truth! And he hit her! And they are supposed to be fine just like that, because he had an accident? It's just weird, this shouldn't be a SasuHina, I liked Naruto but he is now crazy, it would have been better if he helped her and they fell in love during her divorce or something like that, Now I just want Hinata to grow a spine and run away from them both.

I am sorry if this was harsh, this is just my opinion, I love fanatics and I appreciate this one, and I'm thankful you updated, I really hope to see an update soon, and I can't wait to read what happens next.
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