Hey!
Amazing story!

Alicia :)

Beautiful.

I have never cried from reading or watching anything before - everyone around me would describe me as a stolid, emotionless person. Reading "The Unspeakable Girl" was the first time I have ever cried from reading anything - it was that good. It touched me so much emotionally; it connected perfectly with me. It was a perfect story. Simply perfect.

Great chapter! I wish he hadn't died, but I'm glad he's not suffering any more. Plus, he died knowing Remus was happy.

I absolutely LOVE everything about this story. Your writing style is beautiful and your portrayal of the characters is spot-on. I just...wow. :) It had all of the emotions that I was looking for in a Remus/Tonks moment and I love that you kept true to Rowling's story. My hat is off to you, friend. Truly, a job well done.

Brilliant...

Oh, now you've made me sad... I had a slightly more bittersweet story planned. Which I will do... But it's still sad.

Beautiful!

Wait wait wait. They revealed info on Remus in Pottormore? /mindblown. *runs to website* I only got to like, Snape's potion's class in the first book /fail XD

And omfg I can't help going awwww even up to the end. Last line is a bit bittersweet but at least he was happy!

Ah this is so good! Beautifully written and really good plot! The ending was beautiful too :) well done!

tragic but very sweet
I love your perspective on Lyall and Remus and their father/son relationship

This is one of the most beautiful Fanfics I have ever read...
Keep up the good work!

Pip that was soo bloody brilliant, I adore the way you wrote Lyall and Remus' relationship, Lyall seems so sweet and he really only wanted the best for his son, and the ending and the whole concept of that just broke my heart, you should really write another one-shot about that next day with Remus and Tonks and Lyall's death, that'd just make my week, yeah it was all just kinda perfect I'm going to favourite this, and go catch up with the rest of your stuff :D

This is horrible but amazing at the same time. Now that we know Lyall was alive during this time, I think this kind of thing is totally canon-worthy. And I truly hope he did get to meet Dora and know that his son got what he deserved!

Good job, thank you so much. Very well written, particularly the incorporation of material from Pottermore. See you again soon.

Ah. So perfect.

I kind of want to read the Pottermore back story, but I really don't want to play the walk through. Your adaptation is a great incentive to get onto Pottermore, and discover more HP. Thank you.