I really like your story. I think it's very interesting and I look forward to the next update. It's a great story, very original, and I like that. Lots of the si-oc stories are more or less the same, and I'm very happy that I've found this one. Thanks for this amazing story!

Good stuff.

Could do with a great deal less angst/mystery concerning the past life. That part should be diminishing in importance as he adapts to his environment, anything else leads to insanity and death, and most people have no interest in reading someone else's descent into madness.

That was bloody hilarious with itachi and kisame hahahaha

Too confusing, not gna read any more.

Pretty alright, but again emo time is getting annoying. Just completely drop his old world, make him remember that his whole family actually died or that he was in a coma and died and that's how he's in this world or something to get rid of the whole annie crap, no offence to annie if she is real, but I didn't read this story to read about a woman named annie and a kid named hope, I came to read a naruto fic

WOW...
Kiba OC-SI...

(And don't forget the NH all over it as well. LOL)

And your update rates...
WOW, just WOW. :)))

good chapter, keep up the good work, byes

interesting turn of events, wonders what will happen next, byes

Well that sucks balls. Kind of wish he gradually forgot his past personal life and combined kiba's memories with his own since arriving. Really hope he sticks it to Aiko when he wakes up about calling naruto a thing and really guilt trips her. Also Kiba said some really true shit there, chuck or whatever the fuck this bi-polar retard's name is completed fucked them and he just leaves tenten and any other woman alone. God he comes across as gayer than MJ.

Great chapter, keep up the good work, byes

Good stuff, hope he gives up on going home after realising that his daughter is better off away from him and he needs to get on with his life here in the naruto world. The angst is really destroying the story.

You'll see in chapter 8. All I'm saying for now is that Akamaru isn't the only jerk off. Jiraiya falls in that range as well.

Pretty good, although it gets really confusing when you start making him go on one of his nostalgic trips out of nowhere. Also what is tenten doing in the hot springs during the finals when she was at the stadium in canon?

good chapter, keep up the good work, byes

Interesting fight scene, byes