| Reviews for Roads Untraveled |
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Fantooome chapter 23 . 10/11/2015 I've just finishing your story and I absolutely loved it! That was awesome, great job. I will read more of your fics ! (sorry for the bad review, english is not my first language..) |
AngelOfDeathOfWrestling chapter 23 . 2/26/2015 I love this story very good! :3 |
KellyK200769 chapter 23 . 7/22/2014 So since i was waiting for your other story to be updated i hadto read this one. OMG you do know how to let characters have a happy ending. Im convinced that you totally love torturing your characters. The must be a place trapped up in your mind where you have them all chained up naed amd whip them naughty, it was wonderful. Thanks again |
DashingJetBlack chapter 23 . 2/16/2014 And we're at the end :( Noooo. I'm sorry all my reviews for the last quarter are like 2 and a half months late but I'm a hideous procrastinator (my last chaptered fic had almost two months between a chapter update) and there's not much good stuff coming up on here lately, just fucking Mary Sue shit. This story immediately stood out with its awesomeness! Coddles and ROman are just too cute! I never thought I'd get on that ship but I genuinely am! Since Teddy's gone (and Josh Mathews is on his way out) the slash partners for the adorable ravenette are running thin (Randy belongs to Cena, nobody else, sorry)! The sex scene was intense and hot and the drama after was fantastic. I was literally hoping Roman would sort his shit out and not hurt my precious Coddles. The only tiny thing I'm going to criticise was the inconsistent use of real names - personally I'd have had all of them go by their ring names in narrative text but use their real names for drama, like Cody calling Roman 'Joe' during sex or Ambrollins doing the same in their sex scene. Punk, the Usos, Cameron and Naomi all had their real names (I know with Total Divas its hard not to!) but the rest went by their ring names. But that's a tiny detail and did not take anything away from how freaking good this story was and I;'m going to miss it! I'm gonna check more of your work out from now on! I've started a new chaptered fic too, called 'When Raw Wraps' :) And thanks to this I'm going to use some of the Shield members cos theyre one ship I've not written past RPs xx |
DashingJetBlack chapter 22 . 2/16/2014 Awwww! The walking around Davenport part was so adorable. Dean's finally relaxed and allowing stuff to happen, and the sex (FINALLY) was hot too, though I didnty get a bottom!Dean fix but it was hot anyway! ;) Oh bless Dean, both with the ahem..prejacking and still wondering if Sethie is comparing him to Roman. I liked that touch, it made it much more realistic and less like a movie which I think most fics fail on. I myself will take that on board. Thats what I love about this story, everything seems so real. Ambrollins finally got their happy ending. Yay! |
DashingJetBlack chapter 20 . 2/16/2014 Oh wow this was intense! FINALLY Seth allowed Dean in and HOW. Punk was so wonderfully douchey about getting Sethie to himself purely to stick two fingers up at Dean. Damn you for teasing. Dean bottoming is HOT AS FUCK. In my Ambrollins that I've dabbled in (RPs, not on here) Seth is the top but they occasionally flip flop. I know Seth's slimmer, shorter but to me he looks like a manly college student and Dean's smooth all over and got a booty haha. I really hope they go all the way next time. I want to see Dean just let go and enjoy it. Hot chapter. One of the best so far. |
DashingJetBlack chapter 19 . 2/15/2014 Uh-Oh..I thought Punk would muscle in on Sethie last chapter. Don't do it Seth! If only you knew how possesive Dean was of you... Dean just needs to sort his shit out pronto or he'll lose Seth to The Best In The World. I 3 Coddles and Mizzy's friendship as well. Too fucking adorable. Dustin can't be down with seeing his little brother all bruised and doing the rough nasty with Roman. Roman needs to show Dustin that he cares for ickle Coddles. The opening scene was cute as well. I love Coddles being a little wind up merchant! |
DashingJetBlack chapter 18 . 2/15/2014 Hallelujah. About time Dean pulled his head from his arse and told Sethie how he really feels. Poor Seth has been through the mill in this story. For God's sake just let Dean get close to you! And HELLO. What is this? Renee and Kaitlyn?! Damn that was sexy. Get it Renee gurl. I can seriosuly picture Kaitlyn with another woman, taking charge... Coddles and Roman are just too cute. Treat him right Roman. Just look at that little puppy dog face and love him. |
DashingJetBlack chapter 17 . 1/31/2014 I came back to this story and what a return to come to! FInally! Coddles hottest bottom in WWE. And he has toys and likes to play with himself. So cute and hot as fuck. Tip for Roman...you really want Coddles to love you, get him to go over the edge hands free ;) Loved the intervention of Dustin, always looking out for his little brother. Awwwww. |
Loretta's Purple Orchid chapter 23 . 12/2/2013 So sad this is over but I do love how you tied everything up. I loved the pairing in this, it just made it that much better. I'm toooooo excited for your return next year (so excited I might even do a little dance when you come back lol). But until then HAPPY HOLIDAYS and HAPPY NEW YEAR (-) |
CheekyClaudine chapter 23 . 12/1/2013 It's not over. Can't wait for the next chapter in this story that has not ended. |
notherenotyet chapter 23 . 12/1/2013 Sad to see this ocme to an end, great stuff :) |
DashingJetBlack chapter 14 . 12/1/2013 This chapter was awesome! As soon as Seth went begging for it off ROman I just thought 'you IDIOT!' and then the same about Roman for caving in and banging him. Thats guys for you. Trust me! Hahaha. Wow poor Dean. Behind the armour there's a man who has feelings and I dont blame him for giving Roman several bunches of fives. Talk about being stabbed in the back. Poor Coddles. Every chapter I just want to hug him so much. Nobody can do the sad kicked puppy quite like him and hes always adorable in fics. I am spamming with reviews because I just love this fic. It's Coddles-based and has multiple pairings going on and friendship groups (I'm from the Cupid's Got Me generation - an awesome fic by Fly Airbourne which I cannot recommend enough). |
DashingJetBlack chapter 12 . 11/30/2013 Awesome chapter. The part with the text, when you're waiting for someone to reply and when they do it's short-shrift...I know that feeling only too well and you captured it perfectly. I know its a minor detail but sometimes the small things really count! About time Deth happened! Dean's been beating around the bush long enough! Liked the scene in Naomi's apartment. The only small thing I will say is, why are she and the Usos referred to by their real names when everyone else goes by their ring name? I've probably brought it up before but it's literally the only thing I dont like about this cos the rest of this tale is awesome! Dustin being protective of his little brother Coddles (who's just so adorable in this) was amazing. |
DashingJetBlack chapter 10 . 11/30/2013 Awwww :'( Been AGES since I caught up with this story and now have 14 chapters to read OMG. Codiase RIP for real then :( Joking aside, I thought Teddy was an absolute asshat for showing up like this, almost like he knew Cody was just about to start getting over him and then BAM he rolls up when Roman's there. Roman I feel really bad for, always being a substitute for others - Dean, Teddy...and there was him thinking he'd found someone who'd love him for being him and not just muscles and a rumbly voice. |