| Reviews for Second Chances |
|---|
   Jhenifabray chapter 8 . 7/21 Continue |
| BaddieDZ2 chapter 2 . 7/1 No idea why I clicked on this, but here we are. Your English being worse than something a retarded, armless monkey, has is surprising, but then I saw you've got dozens of stories, and are too stupid to complete literally any of them. Why are you even on this website? You're a fucking disgrace. |
| koseta.a chapter 1 . 6/12 Previous comment of mine, apparently equal sign doesn't show up so imagine spaces also another typo you used were instead of the needed where... I'm not even halfway thru the first chapter |
| koseta.a chapter 1 . 6/12 You made a couple mistakes AWALAWOLAway With Out Leave Straitstraight |
| stylo1 chapter 7 . 5/26 your english is pretty sucky your plot rather unbelieveble especially the world building (the hokage has no power in your story) and i have to say writing 48 stories and none of them past 50k, most even them no even past 10k. why would you even bother writing |
| Rickjames196 chapter 8 . 5/12 Dang shame you didn't continue this. Wanted to see him save uzu |
| mateususantosu chapter 3 . 12/10/2019 I thought he was supposed to be stoic. oh well |
| lou2003us chapter 8 . 12/3/2019 I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work! |
| Ferocious Nightfury chapter 8 . 10/21/2019 Damn... this is one awesome story! Please update soon! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| KathyBk chapter 8 . 10/3/2019 More please ... |
| PoorR1chard chapter 7 . 9/18/2019 I didn’t know A was a furry! Wow’ you learn something new every day! |
| smokeapound chapter 8 . 8/12/2019 really wish you would update this story |
| Primus2021 chapter 4 . 4/9/2019 Ino-Shika-Cho was a given. Team Hot Mama lol, Tsume, Mikoto & Kushina, cool. Naruto as for the other teams ... ... Hizashi, Fugaku & Mebuki Haruno. maybe Tsunade. Hiashi, Minato & Kizashi Haruno. Jiraiya. Yoshino Nara, Inohime Yamanaka (Ino's mom) & Choko Akimichi (Choji's mom). (2nd I-S-C) idk Shibi, Hitomi Hyuga (Hinata's mom) & Shippo Inuzuka, lol. (Kiba & Hana's dad). (Team 8) Dan Kota. |
| colebryant246 chapter 7 . 2/21/2019 that exploding shirt though |
| SnappingFlower chapter 3 . 10/17/2018 Such horribly atrocious grammar, mightily horrendous to the extreme and oh so terrible to read. I have only seen a story of this likeness once, with a premise of a time traveling Naruto stuck inside the body of one Madara Uchiha. Even the pairing with Kushina is the same, along with the harem. *sigh* For shame, and I had wanted to read a story of such a potential. Oh well, I guess there is no helping it now, better to just leave my opinion on this horrendous, headache inducing, punctuation lacking, piece of feces... I beseech thee o Author, perchance you would be favorable on endeavors such as working on your Grammar... and your punctuations... and your writing style in general. ... Please. ~Snappy~ |
