That was wonderful! A story within a story within a story...
I've never read anything like that before. You are a talented writer.

Oh this was great! I enjoyed the stories within stories! You did a wonderful job.

Aslan's Blessings!
Fierce

Lovely story and it good to see that Susan had a long life and a family and she married Roger. Each of the story's you had Susan tell had a message in them. Well done.

As I said in my NFE review, I love the expanded, extended look at Susan's wonderful and full life. I love your head canon. It's a wonderful story.

love love love this, how one story flows so naturally into another! And it sounds like Jenna & Donna are one of those who will "one day be old enough to enjoy fairy stories again"