Oh gosh I LOVEEE protective Rio! He's soooo sweet to Shino! There's literally not enought of it in the anime and manga!

Love this piece! Got to say this is the best I have read so far from these! Will definitely be looking for more of your works!

I lije the story wish it was Genpachi with Shino instead though

This seems like a really good story, but oh my god you need to fix all your grammar/spelling errors. Seriously, get your stories beta'd.

can't stop reading till the end! good story! I love SouShino very much n I guess I can love AoRio too~
the plot is good enough too, there were conflict n yakuza world-i love yakuza story.
sorry for reviewing only on the last chapter.
fave~
regards,
Kyou Kionkitchee

Oh dear
there so much I could say for this awesome tale..
first, I believe I should apologize cause I didn't review each chapter.
second, uh wow.. when I saw the tag and the chapter numbers I just can't help to try avoid this story countless time. until my curiosity reach it's limit.
third, ohhh! I so damn love how you wrote this story and how adorable each chapter was.
fourth, I still remember each time I remind my self about the tag of hurt/comfort things that's make me repeat my 'stop here, it's gonna face the hurt part soon ' thought, fortunately I can't help to keep going.
the last, I believe it's took me 13-hours to read all chapter and during those hours I feel like im in this story world.
well sorry for the long post and thanks for the pleasure you gift trough this story ;)

Wooo! This is great man! I didn't think Rio would swing that way! BTW, I read this from the start.

great story

it was awesome
the plot was steady and well crafted. I liked it a lot. thanks for the wonderful story...
but if I so as make a request for another one with keno x kobungo, genpachi x shinobu and others of course but them being the main pairing. I actually liked the pairing you made, but I just thought that maybe it would have been fine if daikaku (is It?) would have a partner too, you know?
I hope to see your next story:)

Oh my! This is beautiful story! One of my fav! You brought the fluffyness at front chapter vreatly. I love the setting, the character, how you bring it with your words - everything. You successfully bring the smirk, giggle, and the tears as the chapter go on. Oh my god! I couldn't bear to read about ao state and rio's too after the kidnapping accident. But-yeah, you bring the end fluffly again yet smexy *smirk

Thank you :)

This is good fan fic! ;)

Are u able to make a valentine's day chapter? Since it's close to valentine's day. I love this story very much.

When you make the new story for innocent encounter, can u make a chapter where shino and sousuke go on a date. That would make me soo happy.

omg! sequel! sequel! we'd like to know what happened to genpachi and shinobu and the others!

Thanks for commenting on my story. I'll do past tense for now on lol. I know your just helping me become a better writer.