This was excellent. Low key and good characterization. It is a good peek at what could be the beginning of an awesome relationship.

That was so beautiful. It flows very well and it's in-character and one of the best Gaiten fanfics I've read.

just beautiful

Aww, Gai is such a cutey. Gotta love Gai.

This was truely sweet. My favorite part was when Tenten said, "I wish you had someone to take care of you. I wish I could be around to take care you you."

He wished that, too.

Gai has a hard and sharp build but such a sweet personality. And you captured that perfectly. I love Gaiten and age difference is not a put off for me. I hope you write more because there truely isn't enough stories with this couple.

first attempt or not, it was REALLY CUTE! and it was nice to see gai for once not being the bumbling idiot meant just for humor. :) Good job I really liked it 3

Sounds good so far, please update soon!

I love this story, even with the age gap. It's sweet, intimate, and made me shed a tear near the end. Well done!
-Little Hoarder

Okay. 1. Too much of an age gap to be kosher for me (which is why I haven't read you're TentenKakashi stories). 2. I've never heard of anyone changing from "sensei" to "senpai." That said, this has all the clever mix of martial skills, Tenten sass, and personal intimacy steeped partially in necessity I've come to expect from you, which is why I decided to give it a shot.

After reviewing your pairings, I've noticed there is no TentenSai nor TentenEitheroftheMistswordmasters. Yeah, Chojuro looking at any woman besides the Mizukage is probably a major stretch, but since he and Suigetsu both carry fancy weapons... Just a thought.

Thank you for nice fic. Hope you are well.

What a great story I like the teaming of these 2 together

I like it. Give it a chance. XD
you might be able to make this into more than just a promise.