Reviews for Sarah and Ellie at the Bar
j.santacruz98 chapter 1 . 1/16/2017
Very nice story, I enjoy seeing Sarah and Ellie bond even if it in the end of more thanm a few shots of Techila
Mr. M.Parker chapter 1 . 6/18/2014
That who's a super great and funny little story to read.
And Sarah who's so funny in the story, it who's a great Ellie and Sarah story too.
charahkids chapter 1 . 12/12/2013
OMFG! LMFAO! Drunk Sarah was ridiculously hilarious! Lucky47 was right. This is a great mini story great all by itself!

Thanks Bill! :-)
coreymon77 chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
It's been a while since I've done much fanfic reading. I've simply had too much to do. But, I suddenly felt like it tonight, so I poked through the archives and found this one.

Great job there, Bill. Sarah and Ellie stuff combined with them both getting drunk with some Charah on top of it all. That was a fun read.
da87 chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
Class as usual hope you bring back your other stories to fanfiction
Katsumara chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
Ha. Awesome little one-shot here, Bill! Love the mushy kind of stuff, personally! :D
Dan Schultz chapter 1 . 10/5/2013
That was a great story. Always liked Sarah and Ellie interactions. You have always been good at it.
Jimmy 144 chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
Glad you added the story. Nice idea.
ersk4 chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
Devious and sneaky Ellie is always fun. Thank you for a delightful and enjoyable read! I'm glad you posted this. And this was for "Family Matters"? I had given up on that one as I thought it was in the unfinished story land.
2old2write chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
Laughing ... laughing ... laughing!

This was so much fun to read. With so many deep, dark stories or pain, angst, spies, double crosses, guns and knives and lost memories, this was just light and fun. Yes, there was the worry and concern from Sarah about Ellie's feelings towards her, but deep down I think we all knew that El truly loved Sarah and knew she was the spark of life in Chuck's heart.

And what a great twist with Ellie turning the table on Sarah with the drinking game. Somehow I wondered why Ellie didn't know about tequila shots, being a college/post graduate/med school and surely a bridesmaid multiple times.

Loved all of Ellie's and Sarah's quotes once they returned to the apartment. These all had to help Chuck a whole lot, too. Too bad Sarah won't remember. They should have been recording it. Does Casey still have surveillance going in there?

I think it's funny that there are several Sarah/Ellie getting-to-know- you fics on here (including one by yours truly) and they all involve the two of them getting drunk together. hehehehehehehe

Thanks for a charming, funning little tome to lighten and brighten an otherwise totally blah day. Sharing this with us is a wonderful gift. More of these two together would be more than welcome.
James Mowery chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
I have to say this was a very charming and touching story. I have to say that in spite of the fact that I don't buy for a minute that Ellie could drink Sarah under the table and that Sarah would allow herself to come so unglued in front of someone she was so nervous about. All that being said the sweetness and emotional truth of the moment over rode these quibbles. I'm glad to see you posting little gems like this despite your difficulties with some of your critics. It's good to know you're the bigger man as well as a gifted writer. Speaking of gifted writers, any chance of persuading your friend Lucky47 to finish off her magnum opus? Hint! Hint!
Angus MacNab chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
That was fun. I liked the way Ellie sandbagged Sarah. There was something not quite right about her ignorance of tequila shooters that raised red flags when I read it.
TheIntersect20 chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
Ah, classic Ellie. I did not see that one coming! Great story.
jinxed97 chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
Great story, Bill...glad you're still writing every once in a while.
Need to tell Lucky that she has a story to finish...it is my Favorite.
wilf21 chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
That was a really nice one-shot. Welcome back to ; glad you're here.
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