Way to go Pepper! Poor stressed out Tony

OH NOOOOOOO

lmao doing favors for james cameron

I love the blood pressure lines

I like the rotation of pov’s happening. I hate hammer, but you’ve got his voice down and that’s awesome. Also poor pepper!

Bendito : ( They think she's crying because of the pain. Poor Pepper

I love how you get Tony's voice just right!

Tony freaking out is so sweet! And I loved the "whose?" thought before he calmed down.

It happened so quickly! Aaaaaaah!

ooooooooooh! He's evil !
Very well told. Love his POV!

i'm loving your writing style. and this story lmao

Re-write the first couple chapters. They were terrible i.e 'darky' etc etc amateur mistakes, but mid way its great

it was so worth reading it~! I loved every chapter and I can't wait to see more fics from you

Hi again! Guess I'm all caught up (at last)! :D

I love how Tony treats the bad guys. He locks them inside a cell, but what makes it especially brilliant is that Tony was once locked inside the said cell. Such sweet revenge... :D

The part when Tony helps Pepper get out of the armor is fantastic. I love that you keep what has happened in the previous chapters: the blood stains on Pepper and her mangled skirt (because the suit is designed for male build). Her exchange with Tony is cute; it's nice to see that they understand each other. Pepper isn't going to see the doctor if Tony isn't going (although I feel bad for his face), and Tony believes that they don't need to argue, since her bleeding has stopped (and she also has cared less about it).

That ending is just so sweet. I am already smiling by the time Tony answers that he has hungry lips, and well! They finally kiss. Also, the calming atmosphere of the ending just fits very much to the various rides we have gone through in the previous chapters. The image of Pepper snuggling into Tony's arms and falling asleep, and then Tony also falls asleep, is just a very, very nice and calming ending. They deserve such moment after all the problems they have faced in the previous chapters.

All in all, this has been a fantastic ride! There are the drama, humor, suspense, and actions, and they all make me feel, laugh/chuckle/grin, keep reading and hoping that the good guys will make it through. Superb work! Thanks for writing! :D

Hi again!

I can understand Tony's worry at the beginning. He doesn't have his armor, while he's with the bad guys who have weapons with them. It's also tense (basically, this whole chapter keeps me on the edge of my seat), as I keep hoping that nothing bad is going to happen to Tony...and then there's a clang that makes the bad guys surprised and panicked. I thought Tony's thought: [Take my reactor and I'm done.] is going to be true, but glad that it doesn't. And when the hatch's wheel turned slowly... I first thought that the bad guys will be attacking Tony once they see Mark VI, but luckily they don't.

What a great climax! It's very tense, and has plenty actions as well. Starting from Mark VI's entrance, then the goons' bullets deflected by the suit, and ricocheting bullets (I can relate with Tony when he gets worried about them). I love that Tony at first doesn't think that it's Pepper who's in the suit, and I especially enjoy the sequence of Mark VI launched the suitcase to Tony. And the sequence of the suit enveloping Tony? That's just awesome. The descriptions make me as if I'm watching the show (actually, not just the suit sequence, but the whole climactic sequence starting from Mark VI's entrance).

The ending is cute, which is really nice after the whole suspenseful climax. I love the exchange between Tony and Pepper. ["Only because I look like you."] Haha, this line is just brilliant. Both of them are in the armor after all.

Well done!