*reads the end* t-thats not how genetics work

Love it

Shoot. It's Too bad that there will be no Fluttershy/Clover Romance. Hopefully IF Clover(Female Harry Potter) is ever Romantically Paired With/Implied to Be With Anyone It Is a Girl/Female! I was Hoping For Clover(Female Harry) Femslash(Girl/Girl Or Female/Female)!

Please update soon

Omg this is adorable I love it so much

.more.
No pressure XD

Tia was in the sun obviously.

I'd like to offer one of my MLP O.C.s for your fic.

I know she hasn't DONE much, but I do love Marwolaeth.

Hey, Hi! I love this story so much and I'm very excited to read more as the chapters come! I love that Clover is settling into her role with grace! I have a question if you don't mind answering. Clover has the ability to spirit walk and others regarding her position as the guardian of the dead, so I was wondering if we would be seeing more of that in coming or later chapters?

I can't wait for more. When you go to collage how far are you planning on going? What will your major/bachelor's be in if you plan on going that far?

Is it weird that I read the Jamaican accents in Hermes Conrad's voice from futurama? Just checking and trying to mess with other people's perceptions of what this sounds like! Keep up the good work writing!

I can't wait for an update

Um, this is cool! I'm going to do an OC because ah, why not?

OC Name:

OC Species (NOT AN ALICORN): Sea Serpent (it can't JUST be our lovely mustache friend, there must be more)

OC Gender: Female

OC Coat Color (Their Body Color(s)): Honey-ish

OC Mane/Tail Color(s): hmm.. chocolate brown

OC Eye Color: strawberry red

OC Age: 13

OC Height: umm, I don't know, if you want to use it, guess yourself (beats self up over laziness)

OC Family: cousin of umm.. Stephen Magnet, right?

OC Background: you know what? Just.. I'm super bad at this. If you're using her, just put it in your headcannon. *fires at school* "YOU TAUGHT ME NADA ABOUT CHARACTER CREATION YOU USELESS BUILDING!"

OC Personality: quirky and eccentric. When there's multiple sounds going at once, or loud sounds (e.g at a fair, or when there are multiple conversations), she tends to get very stressed. Loyal to anypony she cares about, blunt and very sensitive.

OC Job: I dunno? Living? Sorting out the lake? Uhhh... Dunno. What do you think a sea serpent would do?

OC Cutie Mark: n/a

OC Special Abilities/Talents: thinks very logically, and can figure out the steps needed to do something (but has to do it from end to start)

OC Special Notes/Interest: uhh, has high functioning autism, could ignore it, I'd be cool with that, but you could probably use it as a lesson on stigma or something. BTW, when I'm writing this, I'm exhausted. Not an excuse, just sayin'.

Your Name: I dunno, what is your name? I'm TinyFox, nice to meet you.

Random question: is Clover going to tell anyone about the wizarding world? I can see Fluttershy maybe getting the information using the stare, lol.

-a random half-dead Asperger's

So, I know pairings are undecided still for this. Im just going to suggest Crysalis/Clover Cryer? Clovalis?

Im a sucker for Crysalis redemptions XD. not to mention how its never said how long a changling queen lives, they could be functionally immortal like the Alicorns and Crysalis can use her powers so theres no need to fall back on "magic and the power of love"

that and I think the queen wouldnt mind having a willing and happy love donor.