*deep breath* A lovely piece of artistry.

I detest greasy dishwater, but I feel the same sort of accomplishment after scrubbing the tub to a glistening white or the sink shiny.

Great story! Love all the fics you write.

Ah, I loved the ending. It's what Obi-Wan and Dela deserve. Especially Obi-Wan. And an different perspective, too. Not many first perspectives out here. Loved this!

I love this story. I'm reading it again, after reading it once a loong tiem ago, before I had an account. It's just so...good! I love it!

*giggle* So good! It's so cute how Dela and Obi feel for each other... Teeheehee! But I still have this sense of foreboding that revenge isn't going to do anything... Are any of the Rebels still alive? Will Obi and Dela join them?

*bawls* That was SO touchingly sad. Sniffle... it's even more angsty since I'm listening to J Lo's "Ain't It Funny" while I'm reading... Wah! It's so bittersweet, Obi and Dela... *sob*

Whoa. Just... whoa. I can't even think of what to write... this is SO incredible! OMG. It makes me feel like I'm in a whole new universe from SW... it SO made me cry to picture Obi-Wan as broken like that... So Padme and her twins are dead, then? OMG, what's gonna happen to the New Republic? Whoa. I am SO hooked on your story... it's 2 am and my eyes are burning up, but this is so good, I just HAVE to finish this story... even if it takes me all night and I fall asleep at tomorrow's exam! AHH! Must read!

Cool! I've found you on ! I've read some of your stories on , "Salvaging Hope" being my most favorite of what you've written. It was fantastic reading it again on this site. _ It's so great that Obi-Wan and Dela find happiness in the end. _ Going to go read your other stories!

I decided to read this when you mentioned you had pared Obi with an original character. I really liked this story and I liked how your characters interacted with each other. It was interesting watching each character deal with their own dysfuntions and each others dysfunction. I thought it was interesting when Obi-Wan used the Force to get the alcohol toxins out of her system. I think my favorite scene, though, was when she watched him try to fix the dishwasher. So subtle but so charged! ;D The ending was very nice and Palpatine still got his in the end. Interesting AU story. I liked your original character and plot.

Wow, I used to hate the young Obi-Wan, but I can totally see him acting like this in this story. I love it. Now I am sure I will think of him completely differently every time I watch the prequels. This is a really great story. It makes me cry in some pars because it is just so sweet. Write more Obi-Wan fanfics, please, I like reading about him act like he has some feeling.

You are a great writer!

I love your stories, obaona! I wasn't really a fan of the Prequel Obi Wan until I read your awesome stories on , this story especially! This is one of my absolute favorite SW fics! You are a great writer and I appreciate the detail and diction in your works! Keep up the excellent job!

A very original concept. I love it. So Vader is really dead? I just found this and can't wait to read the rest you have posted!

You can't end it like that. I need more. Please?

Oh! A surprize sweet ending, how cool. Stories are uploaded so fast on this site that I miss the stories I am following. I'm very glad to find this story again, and its ending. Great piece, hope to see more.