| Reviews for Fate: New order |
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iRogue III chapter 1 . 6/12/2018 Creation of all things sounds like the First Magic aka 'Denial of Nothingness'. |
shadow chapter 1 . 9/25/2017 I liked the chapter! |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/2/2016 Too bad you abandoned this... The premise is amazing |
uscias chapter 1 . 10/7/2014 Please update soon. |
Tobi-Douchebag-666 chapter 1 . 6/3/2014 No rasengan of rasenshuriken mentioned |
King ofheros chapter 1 . 2/19/2014 creation of all things would be pretty much the denial of nothingness of type-moon world right? |
Cinder.Kitsune chapter 1 . 12/31/2013 Please update soon |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/24/2013 put a new chapter up |
DayDreamer.1007 chapter 1 . 11/9/2013 So far so good, man ! If Naruto was the one who reintroduced chakra to the world, shouldn't his mana reserve be higher than just A ? Because all of the mana in the world is basically his, just like all of the chakra in his time was all the Juubi's. An the rank you give for his "Item Construction", shouldn't it be higher ? Restoring nature and recreating the sun aren't small feats. And I saw the chants on your profile. Maybe it's just me, but I think they are a bit too similar to the Reality Marbel aria. Keep up the good work, man. And update soon. |
Hakuryukou79 chapter 1 . 10/21/2013 So far it is interesting. Though, you should work a little more on the banter between Naruto and Madara. But damn, Naruto is broken as hell with those stats! Good luck and I look forward in seeing more of this story. |
lostimpact chapter 1 . 10/11/2013 please please please continue this storyyyy this is just cool |
DragonOfApocalypse chapter 1 . 10/7/2013 It was amazing! I can't wait for more! Is there a pairing? :o Anyway thank u very much for the chap Greatly appreciated! Have a nice day! |
Sennen Goroshi Hyakshaku chapter 1 . 10/7/2013 A fantastic start to what promises to be a very good story. Very good plot. However, there are some grammar and spelling mistakes that you should correct. Also, the in-fight banter between Madara and Naruto - yeah, that wasn't so good. They sounded like they were little kids, with really dirty mouths. But anyway, hope you update soon. |
Arai kaji chapter 1 . 10/4/2013 I like what you have done so far and look forward to the next and future chapters. |
Mareq chapter 1 . 10/2/2013 Naruto's creation ability is essentially the First Magic, it would be awesome to see peoples reaction to him essentially being a Magician of a True Magic, they will be shifting themeselves. |