Wish you had just straight up introduced them as full adults...

"As things turned out, lots of running, dead bodies and monsters are involved. They find Mr Murray in the cellar without his head. Half the guards have been replaced by some sort of shaping shifting creature Mr Smith referred to as Cretschsalkator. They manage to get the other children out of the building before luring the creatures to the cafeteria.

The explosion is pretty spectacular."

I just LOVE how you manage to compress an entire TV episode of Who into one paragraph back in chapter two. Beautifully crafted story...I need more!

Oh my god this is awesome. Ignore the silly trolls, anyone with a fully functioning brain could tell this is an AU and a brilliantly done one as well. Seeing the two most dangerous men in their respective universes interact is a treat. Please continue...

Just wanted to say this was awesome! You've written both the Doctor and Riddick so well, and the story is interesting. This story shows the potential gold mine that this fandom crossover is. I really hope this isn't abandoned, I'm dying to read new chapters of this.

Ciao XP
Loony

Just because people say you've got things about Doctor Who wrong, is that any reason to be abusive?

Doctor Who does often contradict itself. But this has said things it has not.

The DW canon has certainly not contradicted itself about one thing-that line about the Time Lords. Because the Doctor has never said it and neither has anyone else.

Apart from that thing about the Time Lords, hasn't Riddick Rule The Dark ruled this out?

Wonderful wonderful wonderful

If the universe forgot the Time Lords, that's news to me. Especially considering the number of times they've been mentioned.

Great story, very interesting. I'm looking forward to their next encounter.

If the universe forgot the Time Lords, why have characters since 2005 talked about them?

Cool cross, I'm a fan of both Who and Riddick and am looking forward to more. I was kind of looking for another Riddick Who cross, the only other one I've really seen was kind of creepy with MPreg moments after the Firefly bits got crossed in more too. I didn't really see any big canon divergences that couldn't be blamed on the new crossverse, maybe a few Whovian alien names I either didn't recognize or seemed misspelled in a few chapters...then again I'm only a 'it holds my interest fan' not a 'rabid, learn every detail, including made up languages, almost cant separate reality from fiction fan', so maybe about your 'cute little troll prblem' in their mind they can justify their trolling.

The Krillitanes and the Sontarans among others spoke about the Time Lords.

this is so good! preserving the flavor of two fandoms at the same time is really hard but you are managing it and i can't wait for more of it 8D