Great job

biggest trash I've read

Wow

Jaja

I loved this story plzzz update .

i really like this story you're a great writer thank you for the story I can't wait too read more of your story's...

Good story, but why stop here?

that was great

it was great i'm telling my boy and i'm so horny to be e'm cumming.

need to have more

EXCELLENT STORY, CONGRATULATIONS FOR MAKING THAT!
i want to se the next chapter

too much hinata...dropped

This tale was fucking awesome aside from Anko joining because to me it just seem like a wore joining in on a personal group of friends even though you created a false history between them. Honestly it would been epic if Karin replaced Anko. I find certain characters will always win out if they're in a poll Hinata, Anko, Fem Kyūbi Fem Haku and even Tayuya when in a poll will be top choices by readers hence why when I wrote my story I didn't put them in a harem but rather they live or are a female in Kyūbi case because I already wanted them to join plus I feel a harem shouldn't have a limit because of the great potential for others to join and choosing one character over another that deserves an bigger chance to join then someone that in it. I feel Amaru, Koyuki and Karin all deserve more of chance than Anko but yet she was selected damn in even a Fem Kyūbi deserve in over her. As much as I'm a Hinata hater I stomach her if one not mostly not focused on her or I skipped chapters that is highly centered on her yes I skipped the Hinata chapters at the beginning

Your timeline is confusing cause you make it seem like it's after the war but if it's the sequel to the plot with Tsunade and Shizune then it should only be a few months after he brought her back to be the Godaime

I like that you ended the story with a description of temaris thoughts on the other girls. And temari all breathless like that was really hot