Just update! It's soooo good just update PLEASE!

I found this story before I had a fanfiction account, so I couldn't follow it bUT NOW I FOUND IT AGAIN AND I CAN FOLLOW AND WHEEEEEEE

I thank you for the dedication! ( I feel so special right now I can't even (I'm fangirling inside)) Anyways, another wonderfully written chapter on my account, please don't ever stop writing! :3

-Btw, I will use the dedication to brag. :D

That cliff hanger though... Please continue with this story, for I am on the edge of my seat! I have been reading this story for a whole day now and I can't seem to get enough. Keep Writing!

OH, SNAYP!

Be careful Dave. Lalonde women will fuck your ass over.

I knew it! Ha!

PLOT TWIST

How does this not have more reviews?! its fantastic! Update soon!

PLease update ;-;

awwww. But the other picture was so BEAUTIFUL! TT_TT

Oh wow, amaziinig!

The picture's beautiful. Icried on the inside because of how beautiful it is. John just looks so hot. With his khaki shorts (that may also be a skirt, im okay with either) showing off his smooth (maybe long) beautiful legs. He's tiny compared to Dave because dave is just swooping john into a kiss, leaning towards him. You can just tell Dave is taller. And that just makes it even more beautiful (and adorable). It's fitting, the hot john with the hot dave. It's just so beautiful!

THIS FANFICTION IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! You must update as soon as possible!