dont really get the moxxi hate, but oh well. also weird to have zero break out of his haikus. idk
story was good overall. got some feels too

I truly loved this chapter mate.

Hmm... Hyperion Constructer/Ive critism.

Your writing and how the characters is impeccable.

:)

This is so sweet I think you've given me diabetes.

Very well done!

This was awesome, I really loved what you wrote at the ending of how his perspective has changed since being on Pandora.

Hey i like it, i wrote one like this too, bit it was with axton instead of mordecai. Keep up the good work!