Reviews for Sacrifice
Irina68AZ chapter 51 . 9/26/2019
"dad." Happy))))))))))))))))))) I am Very. Rada...)))
"папа". Рада))))))))))))))))))) я ОЧЕНь. Рада...)))
Irina68AZ chapter 20 . 9/18/2019
Slade have children? Nonsense!(((((((((((((Caring doesn't suit him.

у Слейда дети? Ерунда!((((((((((((( Забота ему не идёт.
ZabuzasGirl chapter 1 . 3/21/2019
Nice.
TheSilenceIsKillingMe chapter 55 . 12/27/2018
Love it! Your writing is great and I love the story! I'm honestly at a loss for words!
Marigold.Flowers chapter 34 . 8/18/2018
This fic is hurting to read and I love it
Nightenbird chapter 16 . 7/30/2018
Daddy Bruce! Oh how I love you! :D
Nightenbird chapter 2 . 7/29/2018
OM this seems promising:D
Katla1 chapter 55 . 7/28/2018
I envy writers who can write a story this long.
I really liked the idea for this story, hence why I picked it up. The action scenes were the best parts in my opinion, and I only wish there were more of them. :) My only problem with this story was the constant whump, which eventually turned me because I unfortunately felt like Dick was overreacting. The hose didn't terrify me, I can't imagine anyone vomiting as many times as he did... I feel like someone in that situation would become numb pretty fast or even find something to enjoy just so they could stand living. Basically I felt this was an attempt to milk sympathy from the readers.
I hope that doesn't sound too harsh. I wasn't even sure if I should voice my thoughts because this story is complete already. Also I'm trying not to make this review too long. This is a good story. There are many that are way worse than this. It's just that there are stories that are better (including some you've written, which I've favourite.)
Ack! I sound so harsh! :) Good day. I hope my review is helpful.
Katla1 chapter 20 . 7/27/2018
Thank you for writing my favourite kind of villain: The guy who is a definitely a bad guy, breaking the law and all that, but you wonder if he cares and you kinda want to like him but he's still the bad guy.
Katla1 chapter 19 . 7/27/2018
Ugh... that was harsh. But thank you for not being a graphic author. It isn't needed in order to write a good story.
And I really liked reading the scene where he watches his family on the tablet. I could picture it so well. You're really good at description.
Katla1 chapter 17 . 7/27/2018
I just love chapters like these. There's a part in Oliver Twist where Oliver is kidnapped but the guy who was taking care of him thinks he ran off with his money like a common street rat. Although that might be good story telling, I prefer it when the guardian figure knows the kid didn't vanish on purpose.
Katla1 chapter 15 . 7/27/2018
I feel so nervous right now... my gut is in knots! I thought Dock surrendered awful fast but then, what could he possibly do? There's no way out. Slade has his finger on the trigger so to speak.
Man, Bruce is gonna freak when he finds out.
Loved this chapter, and even though I don't comment on every single one, I'm enjoying this entire story so far.
Katla1 chapter 3 . 7/26/2018
Action right away, that's what I love in a story. :D Excited to read the next chapter!
Katla1 chapter 2 . 7/26/2018
Really enjoyed this chapter. I haven't read one of your stories in awhile, so this is a nice treat so far. :)
Asilla chapter 55 . 7/23/2018
How have I missed reading this for so long? I seriously just binge read this thing straight through. Great story, thanks!
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