He is Poseidon Isn't he?

Muse of Fanfiction,
This story is really getting along nicely. I feel bad that not everyone who reads it actually appreciates it. Maybe you can publish it like an actual book. It is really good and I LOVE it so far. I have 57 chapters to go and I think they will be some of the Best Chapters I have read since I started reading Fan-Faction Stories. You actually made me want to start one of my own stories about Hades and Persephone. It's so amazing. Thank you So much I am now out of Writers Block. Thanks again Muse of FanFiction.
-HOWLMOONLIGHT13
P.S. I use Booksie to write not Fanfiction. If you haven't heard of Booksie you should search for it. It's similar to actually publishing your stories.

It's a lovely, captivating story

Hi! I really, really, really, really! love this story (and all your other stories for that matter!). You're very professional with your writing, something I honestly feel like I couldn't do. I can't wait until you finish this story, and I'm excited to see what will happen, although I think I technically do know, since I read the other story you based this off of (the name doesn't come to mind RN).
BTW, I was thinking that maybe you could do a one shot or a two shot based off of this, like "Adien" reacted when he meets "Melindia" for the first time, like "Omigoodness-is-this-really-happening?!" and him remembering some stuff. *crossed out* And then he gets totally disappointed by "Hi I don't think we've met I'm Melidia Hagne" and she doesn't remember him. *end crossed out* Just a suggestion.
So yeah that's just when I had to say, keep up the awesome work and I hope that you'll start writing some more! :upside_down_smiley_face: ERF

Don't you get bored of writing the same one-dimensional villains over and over again? Ok, I get it, you hate Demeter and Hera, but God forbid you let them be complex characters with complex motivations.
I kind of expect this when it comes to Demeter, since there are barely any Hades/Persephone stories where she isn't villainized to a ridiculous extent, but Hera? What possibly could you have against her to warrant such a cringe-worthy portrayal? I understand not liking her, but turning the powerful, proud, intelligent and cunning goddess she is in the myths into this pathetic, hysterical mess who can only scream or cry and who hates her brother's marriage because her own doesn't fit the modern ideas of what a good marriage should be like and because she suddenly loves him (Really? I guess Hades is just so flawlessly perfect that even the woman who barely pays attention to any man who isn't her husband wants him)is just... ugh! There is literally no reason to make her an antagonist in the story of Hades and Persephone. Also, the interactions between her and Hades are just cringey and seem just so out of character for the both of them. Well, I suppose that our perfect romantic hero needs to put the mean girl in her place and publicly humiliate her in order to prove his oh so superior love for our perfect heroine, doesn't he?

Really enjoy this. Hopefully one day you will return to it :)

HOLY CRAP WHAT AN AMAZING STORY! I am in complete shock that this is truly the best Greek myth story I’ve ever read in my entire life? It’s beautiful! It’s amazing?! What a fantastic story you have on your hands, thank you so much for gifting us all with such a story!

I'm having this bad feeling that you've forgot about this story

Have I told you that I like the way you write stories?! I love them all!

Very interesting...

Omg! I can’t wait to read more! It’s getting better every chapter

i know its been like 10 000 years since this was last updated but im glad you redid this one as it was a really good idea and your writing has improved a lot

I hope you'll get better.
It doesn't matter if you finish this fic.
What's important is you get better or that you overcome your depression.
Good luck and stay strong!

This is a great fanfic and I love it!
But Demeter being too powerful is not convincing anymore.
The big three should be stronger than her and they're just use pretty useless.
Persephone may be clueless of who she is, and her powers should be linked to her emotions. So she should have something. Her powers as a spring Goddess and Queen of the Underworld should be powerful.
She may not remember who she is but she also has a strong personality.
But instead she's portrayed to be really weak and doubtful about herself.
Anyway, that's just what I think.
Great fanfic. I hope Persephone fights back and won't do something stupid because she really isn't stupid.
Keep up the good work. Keep writing. .

I came to this fandom late and it was such a shame how i missed out your stories. You will always be THE MUSE, you know? ;)