OMG she's killing me ! I LOVE her humor she's AWESOME !

Update Please

what about when the Olympians when there watching Liz surfing

Your scene with the gods was so out of character and terrible. Azalea is not relatable in the slightest. Luke acting like a retard is a turnoff, and you changing it so that he decides not to join Kronos because Azalea shows up at camp is stupid. She's there for like 2 weeks, and Luke already betrayed the gods months ago. Luke choosing to stay loyal to the gods after his mother, Hermes, Thalia, his failed quest and stealing the bolt and helm... Your story went from somewhat good to just awful so fast that it makes my head spin. I refuse to read any further. Best of luck.

Your prophecy didn't rhyme at all. Fell really flat with the random and unnecessary change. The part with the Fates was also weird. Also, Luke's behaviour... what? I feel like you're not really capturing the characters' properly. Azalea is interesting, but there's a lot that doesn't add up and for a ten year old, she acts like she's in her late teens. I like the idea of behind your story, I just think it needs some work. Thanks for writing it. Good read.

Lily Evans, not Lilly Evens. Embarrassing mistake.

Turn him evil! Heel Luke’s hot

actually, Disney's Hercules used a character called Philoctetes, not Chiron.

Um, in regards to Chapter 2... does Azaela even know what a "pimp" or a "hoe" is?

Does Liz even know what a pimp is?
Or a hoe, for that matter?

Moo plz continue

Please do a story where the Characters read this story. I can just imagine most if not all of them either dying of laughter. I just about died of laughter when reading this story.

This was terrific, I loved it.

Does Azalea even know what a pimp is?

SHRIMPY!
-Luke