Ooooooh. Things are warming up!

!
In all the best sense of the word!

I love Sirius too but he really needs to grow up

Me 2 I love Snape

great story! I loved it!

Great story!

I wish you would have just combined a lot of these chapters and had like an eight chapter story that flowed rather than a bunch of little choppy chapters. The premise of this story is cute but the brevity of each chapter is distracting.

I think you have done a wonderful job with this story, thank you! At first I was irritated with the shortness of the chapters, but I got over it, especially seeing how it kept me wanting to read more and see what was on the other side of the page, so to speak. And I'm impressed that you managed to write this while under that awful work pressure. Thank you for writing!

1

I adored this story. I loved how their relationship progressed and find it hilarious that everyone found out because they overslept. I am so sorry for what you went through personally near the end, but I'm happy you finished it instead of abandoning it.

2 small complaints: When Harry is thinking of happy couples he knows it mentions Remus and Tonks, but Remus is with Sirius in this story. Also, when Hermione is confronting Severus one of her lines has "Harry said" instead of Hermione said.

I loved this story. I worries that the short chapters would annoy me, but it actually worked very well. I loved your portrayal of both Harry and Severus, loved watching the relationship grow. Excellently written. Thank you :-)

So I'm really enjoying this story, but I have one minor question. If Sirius is alive and dating Remus, and Tonks in dating Charlie, how does Teddy Lupin exist? Lol just saying.

good story

This was beautiful! I loved it so much! Thanks for writing this piece!

Wonderful story:)...