| Reviews for The World Before Her Eyes |
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Faith chapter 35 . 7/28 Great work so far! I hope you keep updating with more! |
Guest chapter 35 . 5/18 So I was reading some of the comments people said about this fic, ignore those heartless hater; ) This is really one of the best ones I've read: ) PLEASE UPDATE |
SapphireKnight15 chapter 32 . 5/8 Will you finish it? |
dramionefoever chapter 26 . 5/2 Why cant you just have Hange take blood using a syringe and summon the slug to take her back? |
Guess chapter 7 . 4/21 I think the medic side in Sakura wouldn't be able to stomach seeing someone die right in front of her eyes. She would jump at the chance to heal the wounded. Great chapter by the way, I like how Sakura compares current teammates to her previous ones. |
Guess chapter 5 . 4/21 Author thank you for sharing this story with us. You made my dream come true of a narutoxAOT... I would like to suggest some things. (1) Sakura is not using her chakra or healing jutsu and isn't arguing why she need to learn the gear when she could tree walk. You can add in that she's cautious because she's in a new world and that she observed that nobody seems to be using chakra and later will realize that they are normal people and not a ninja. (2) maybe you can make a scene where she sneak out at night to investigate where she really is because that will be a standard ninja strategy. I really love your story. You got Levi's personality spot on. |
cornalia rosalie hale chapter 3 . 3/15 This story is awful. First of all: too many grammatical mistakes. Second: sakura is usless in naruto but not this much, this sakura is a weak pushover and not at all what s shinobi could be. Even 11 year old sakura from anime was stronger than this. I don't want to spend more time of my life on this shit so I'm leaving. |
SakurA-VioletA chapter 5 . 3/4 This isn't real about the characters |
DiosaAzteca chapter 35 . 2/15 The story continues, I liked it a lot |
Guest chapter 3 . 1/20 Im a little confused. What happened to sakuras chakra? She has the power to punch open mountains and yet she couldnt snap a couple of fabric straps and metal chains? And it does not say anywhere that she could not because she wants to gain their trust or something. Im just confused |
Better Known as Aaliyah chapter 35 . 1/11 After reading through all the chapters, I can tell you that I'm really happy that I kept going. The story is amazing. I'm so glad that you don't follow the plotline of AOT exactly. You make changes here and there, like for example Sakura saving Mike. Or Sakura learning how to harden her body in titan form, before Eren. I also like how each of the characters have slwoly but surely been developing. Mikasa is taught a lesson about how the world does not evolve around Eren. Levi is learning that maybe there is hope for humanity, and that maybe his love with Sakura is proof of that. And Sakura just gets more and more badass as the story continues, I love it. I love that we briefly see what happens back in Konoha, with the great ninja war starting. I wish you would come back and finish the story. Don't listen to the haters. Don't even listen to my previous comment. This story is amazing, and you're amazing too. Thank you for sharing it. |
Better Known as Aaliyah chapter 9 . 1/9 I have to say, I'm getting a bit frustrated with the story so far. Sakura is a lot stronger than what you're portraying her as. I understand she's not the most OP character, nor do you want to make her too overpowered, but in the Attack on Titan Universe, almost any Naruto character can dominate the titans. Especially someone like Sakura, who can crack open the ground and use chakra to heal people. She should be doing a lot more damage by now, so I'm not understanding why she's just been screaming and watching the whole time. Yes, she's in a whole new universe but if she's as determined to protect Eren and his friends like she says she is, then she will. She could have saved Petra and the others from the fate of Annie if she had acted sooner. She honestly could have done so much more damage to Annie. I hope the more I read, the more Sakura actually utilizes her powers because this story has great potential. It's just Sakura,'s character development is regressing. |
Guest chapter 35 . 12/2/2019 Please update please |
HealthtPatchuri chapter 2 . 11/27/2019 Sakura is helpless in either world... will there EVEN be a day when Sakura will EVER be useful? |
Guest chapter 35 . 11/20/2019 love your story every time i read it.. |