Aww! That was so beautiful I love these two together so much They're perfect. But I don't get why Tori couldn't go in Rin's jacket pockets. I was expecting a ring to be in there or something but I guess not? Hm interesting. But I seriously loved this. Great work hun :D

Loved every moment and word! Sad that Rin had toss all his anger at Aii but through all the servers I'm happen that Aii had gotten what he wish for :) such a sweet heart ending

tHIS IS BEAUT LIKE WOW I LOVE THIS IS JUST OMG WOW I NEVER EVEN- JUST LET ME CRYYYYYYY

I'm crying. That was so emotional I seriously was not expecting that. My heart broke during the rape scene and a tear ran down my face when Nitori got hit. This was beautifully written, good job - 100/10

That was dramatic. I am not sure how much I liked the plot twist, but I loved the smut and jerk!Rin (btw, he was pretty scary in the last episode, poor Nitori was flinching so much...). I agree with the other reviewer- some hot action in the hospital would be cool, lol XD Rin should make it all up for Nitori ;)

I'm crying, omg

For one moment i thought that everything would end there when Nitori was hit. but god that was something I did not expect. Nice job.

Ah! What a twist there! I was NOT expecting that AT ALL but I liked it! The rape scene was really hot. Wouldn't mind seeing some bandaged up hospital action (but I'm a huge pervert ahaha). Thanks for writing!