Hahahaha this is gold! Especially that ending. xD

yes

This was awesome!

awwww this is so sweet! so cute and the ending was so funnny great stuff!

Thank you for the story I've had such a hard time finding these to in a fan fiction; I'm just so happy I came across such a good one.

Omg I am bi so I can relate to this

I'm bi so I like reading these

dude u forgot to remove mikasa slowly placing mikasa on a bed lol plus wat a Scooby dooby hokie taka doobie boobie dooooooooooooo! story (7/7)

Very well done! I really liked it. Nice job!

A few grammar errors and the dialouge seemed a little to straight forward. Try to describe emotion in more detail and vividly. Metaphors and similes would work nicely other than concentrating too much on they are phyaically doing in reality. You almost want to fwwl like you are feeling thoae aame pleaaures. That being said, I loved it; I will definately be reading more feom you.

3 luv it

Ooooooooooooool

Love it lots ! :)

Nice story. That ending was funny man.

Love the story, made my imaginations go wild , I shall continue reading more! And perhaps come back to read this once again!