* blink Blink* Im not crying * starts crying * your such a good writer but its so sad * sobs * keep up the absolutely fabulous work

I was ready to beat up two dragon slayers in mind...till I read the end :o mind blown lol jk

Keep going it's a amazing

Okay I so thought the two boys were Natsu and Gajeel until you said "The twin dragons of Sabertooth" (which by the way, I ship sting and Lucy and rogue and levy. No idea why though) unless you meant Gajeel and Natsu

It was sad

OMG I LISTENED TO THIS WITH A SAD SONG SO IMA QUOTE LEN FROM SERVANT OF EVIL "Why? My tears won't stop."

It was so sad i cried. please make more stories I luv u

All I can say: wow. It's not terribly long, but it sure gets it's point across. I'm not one to cry over stories (or tragic ones either- tend to try to stay away from them), but this one managed to move me quite a ways. Not sure why you'd ever consider this as 'bad', but I personally think its beautifully written!

Ahem, now that the professional portion has been written, excuse me as I tend to my fangirl needs.

NATSUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-
GAJEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEL -
WHY. WHY DID YOU DO THAT. I THOUGHT YOU TWO WERE THE MOST FAITHFUL ONES IN THE GUILD, SO WHY? I adored you two in every cannoned thing. I shipped natsuxlucy and gajeelxlevy the whole time!
YOU TWO BETTER PAY. OR ELSE. Look what you've done to my aching heart ( ; n ; ) take responsibility you two, dammit! ( )

So, is there going to be another chapter? Oh ya and I really liked the story it's really good! If I was at home I would probably be crying! But I'm at school and I refuse to cry at school!