Amazing! Cannot wait for sequel. Really hope you get to write it soon. Thank you for sharing your talent

...you can’t just leave me like this. What happens with Skylar? Who is the ‘she’ that is being crushed by darkness? Is it Skylar or is it Ali? What did the TARDIS mean by ‘if she tried hard enough’? I know you probably won’t ever put up the sequel, (but if you do, mind posting something that allows followers of this story to know?) so if it’s possible to tell me, please do. I would take my crack at who and what Skylar is (she’s definitely connected to Ali and the Doctor, what with her flashing golden eyes and how warmly she looked at him) but I simply don’t have enough information. I feel like a bloodhound that’s tracking a scent with only a third-hand scent to go off of. (Also, the only thing I could think of when the Doctor said Clara must have found her room by accident was ‘do you really think Clara found it by accident?’ I mean, Ali is the TARDIS now, she controls the rooms and hallways and everything inside of her, Clara finding her room and her sketch books is done deliberately on her part) What meeting was Ali alluding to when she thought of the two different Doctors meeting? Was it the one on Gallifrey with ‘Day of the Doctor’? Could be, but I have a feeling it’s something else. But then again, that Doctor might not have gone through with it yet so it’s possible. You say that ‘nobody ended up happy... ‘yet.’’ Does that mean the end game was for everyone to be happy? The Doctor, Ali? (Also, was there any romance that I just didn’t catch? I know that Cathie and some others joked about something going on between Ali and the Doctor, but I don’t think Ali really showed any inclination. Besides that one kiss, and I interrupted it as her wya of saying goodbye before she wasn’t able to any longer.) Great story, do hope you get around to posting the sequel, but all the same it was wonderful readying it. Even if the Doctor’s hopes were dashed time and time again that Ali could be saved.

AHHHH I WAS RIGHT! I WISH I WASNT RIGHT BUT I AM! As a side note, frick. Rose could have been the next TARDIS, getting her wish to stay with the Doctor forever, and the Doctor fucked it up. (Might have been his wish as well) Wonder what will happen when the Doctor gets to House. Idris should still be a thing, after all. Of course, the Doctor that Ali saw hadn’t been there yet, but he should in the future. Still have no idea who Skylar is, but I think it’s fine I haven’t made any headway with it considering we haven’t heard of her since then.

...I have to guess while I’m here. I have to. I want my guess for what happens to be marked and known so by the time I get to the end I can see if my prediction was right.

She’s called The Successor, the one constant companion of the Doctor. But if Ali, herself, was constant, they would have met years ago - the very beginning when he either was a child or when he started his adventure. The constant companion of the Doctor, is the TARDIS. River said ‘she’ is dying now that Ali is there. The TARDIS has been acting weird, even before Ali got there. She is what is dying. I don’t know how, or why, or if it’s the matrix is dying or the TARDIS as a whole is, but it’s clear she is unwell. Ali must take the place of Sexy and become her ‘successor.’

Now it’s clear that Skylar is important - Ali met her in the past, and she’s with the Doctor in the future. (Maybe Skylar is what Ali becomes? Maybe, she’s something akin to the interface of Ali-TARDIS? Don’t know, don’t put too much thought into that one) I don’t have many thoughts on Skylar, and with only two mentions of her there’s not enough to go on. On the other hand, she might have something to do with Bad Wolf and the Heart of the TARDIS. Ali noticed that she was quite warm with the Doctor, as if she knew him. And a hint of golden eyes - golden eyes that she drew and looked very similar to Rose’s. Also, when they left you said they missed two words, and the only important two words that follow the Doctor is ‘Bad Wolf.’

That’s all I have at the moment. Might add on to my theories and speculations later on in another review, or I might just wait until the end.

THIS IS AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOME! PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE MAKE THE SEQUEL! I loved this story, and I want to know SO BAD what happens to the girl that is Ali as her mind is trapped in the TARDIS mainframe. I LOVED IT SO MUCH! THANK YOU! SEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEQUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEL!

Noooooo...Why do you do this to me?! The feels!

O.M.G. Okay, first, I LOVE this book. I love the idea the characters the plot... All of it. Second, there are a few errors in spelling through out the story... I'm sure you already noticed them. And lastly... Keep writing. You are so good.

Right so, I finally finished this which I've been putting off because I knew how you were going to end it and I'm sobbing. I thought I would be more prepared, but no. This was just as sad, if not more, as I expected it to be and I hate you asdfjkl;

My brother was born on September 11, 1998. On his fourth birthday the twin towers were struck. May all those deceased rest in peace.

I absolutly love this story! I can't wait for the sequel, i'm really excited!

This is the second most horrifying ending I've ever read in fanfiction.

aw, poor ali :( i hope things get better in the upcoming sequel, which i am SUPER excited for, by the way

IM SO SORYY FOR SWEARING AT YOU T.T I WAS JUST UPSET AND CRYING BUT NOW THAT YOUVE CLOSED IT LIKE THIS I AM SO THRILLED. I mean not happy that ali is trapped inside of herself and uncomfortable and screaming and stuff but freaking exCITED FOR THIS SEQUEL AND OMG THE WAY YOU ENDED IT MADE IT PERFECT FOR A SEQUEL AND IT MADE ME WANT TO WRITE A SEQUEL THE ENDING WAS SO GOOD. So Im seeing operation get clave isn't gonna be that easy but HEY WHATEVER. And will he see the Ali before he met her I wonder? Ughhhhhhh so good! I literally shrieked when I read that operation sequel was a go. I scared my sister senseless XD I love you so much right now. The way you were talking it sounded like you weren't gonna do one. Perhaps Ali now knows why kids like cinnamon toast crunch? Aghgggghg I'm excited cx. ALSO CLAVE IS COMING BACK AND I JUST REALIZED LITTLE CLARA WILL BE THERE? THAT DOUNDS POTENTIALLY PARADOXY. Well I'll see you in the sequel (or sooner if you feel like humoring me)

HOLY MACARONI GOD! I'm crying, too much feels. And the writing is utterly amazing.

fuck you. Fuck you and your fucking last chapter bullshit I don't fucking want an epilogue unless ali comes back to fucking life ok? I'm crying. Is this what you wanted? Are you just that heartless? She's the fucking tardis she can do what she wants. Nothing about this is ok. Nothing. even riVER FUCKING SONG CAME IN AND DIDNT FIX THE DAY WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?! Thanks a lot ;-; (good chapter I guess... T.T)