WOW. This was beautifully written! Now its off to read the other parts to see what happens next!

Thanks for sharing this!

Very interesting take. I look forward on what will develop in your other stories.

Omg! I thought I really liked Rumbelle but you just made me fall in LOVE with them! They way you write them with such emotion and thought into each action is just superb! I would never have imagined Belle that way but it just makes sense.
I already read the rest of their story but I will make it a mission to go back and comment on each chapter.

Great work!

very good. Can't wait for the back story on this one.

This is hot! I would pick Rumple over Gaston any day. 3

i like it

This is so tragically romantic! Very well done and so very tangible!

This was sad but good and I really enjoyed it. Very well written and I thought you kept them in character. I could see this happening if Gaston had Rumplestiltskin's dagger and poor belle was forced to marry him. Well done
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Very nice job. A naughly Belle and Rumple, well, as delicious dark Rumple.
Now why doesn't Belle figure out how to get the dagger (Gaston is clearly not the brightest bulb on the tree)? She could take it and she and Rumple could go far, far away or she could depose Gaston and she and Rumple could take over or any number of other scenarios. thx txm

Man, I need a smoke and some icecream after that what a way to wake up I tell ya! :}

I really would like to hear more about this 'verse. Like how Belle fell in love with him and all that.

Good work dearie, awaiting your next tale

Darling, you had my curiosity. But now you have my attention. I love what you're doing with this AU and I don't find the characters OOC at all. Their personalities shine as you could expect them to, given the situation. I just hope you develop everything further :D

So...when can we expect part two? ;)

Oooh, I really liked this. This is a different idea I've never really seen before. Very interesting. Gaston having control of Rumple and Rumple having an affair with Belle. I can't wait to see what you do next. This is a very dangerous game they are playing.