Damn. Just finished (partly re-)reading "Nana to Kaoru" and "Nana to Kaoru: Black Label/Arashi" and was looking for other thoughts on the upcoming development in their relationship. Great idea, great story! Hoping for more to come :)

I-I love your writing! And I seriously want more for this story O~O I want to see how their adult lives play out, how the date goes, what runs through both their heads as they eat and watch the movie, I wanna see Kairu propose, their wedding, their kids ;~; I want moooooore xD

Oh my god this story is just... Everything is- just- yes. *licks lips* yes... 3

Omg that was just the right amount cuteness and smuttiness. I really enjoyed that I hope I see even more writing from you in the future

Omg I cant believe you updated! You are like the sole good writer of NtK fanfiction in like the world if you think about it! Keep writing please! I can't wait to read more!

More please QQ

Hey LaRosa, I just read your story for the first time, and I had to comment on the superb quality. I think that you've managed to grab the characters and their reactions far better then I ever could; kudos to you, and keep up the good work!

Also, good to see somebody else present in the Scene here on .

this is so awesome w
Moreee!

awwwwww please continue this! khvfgksfkjsd pleaaaseeeeee!

I legitimately cannot wait for the next chapter of this to be released. I'm so curious about what's going to happen! w

This is awesome, and as someone who's lived through that experience just barely clinging to some semblance of self control and dignity, oh dear god. Keep it coming.

I love this. As expected the description of pleasure reads spot on and the switching back and forth between points of view makes for some great storytelling. Really a fantastic start to what is sure to be more hotness!