i like it except one thing. from the whole north, only manderleys believe in seven, other people keep the old gods. they would hardly pray with her to the mother. i think they probably didnt even like stark keeping the faith of seven.

Wow! Your first story? What a great job. :0) Even better would be if you turned this into a series of chapters and kept going with this lovely, well written story! X

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I like it, can you make it into a longer story? I would love to see this as a series, maybe 10 chapters, slowly building up to this. I like the idea and I think if you put more time into it it can really be amazing.

Thanks Kat! I didn't expect a reply so soon! Maybe I'll improve the story and post it again. Mel

I love it! i normally dont review but i read it's your first time so wanted to say good job! - kat