Reviews for Deception
GFan89 chapter 9 . 2/3/2019
This is one of my favorite stories. Hope you are able to finish it. :)
Guest chapter 9 . 8/22/2018
You didn't finish, you need to finish the story.
Navyfan chapter 9 . 11/16/2017
The story is good and the emotions are real. I hope Callen and Kensi will get over these overwelming experience.
(English is not my mother language so I'm sorry for any mistakes I did)
Navyfan
lachicarebelde22 chapter 9 . 11/10/2017
Pls continue
orangetails chapter 9 . 10/20/2017
I do hope you will finish this one day - it would make a great episode. It balances the time Sam and Deeks got tortured by Sidarov, but all the more powerful with Callen being involved as the team leader and torn between his duty as an agent but also feeling protective over Kensi as his responsibilities. You remained true to all the characters, and I really enjoyed all the scenes with Callen and Kensi - I feel sad we don’t get to see much of them together on the show now as they work well together. I’m also glad you kept their relationship strictly platonic, but it was still clear that they care about each other. Really great story - I’d love to see it properly finished (that promise Callen made to talk to Kensi...) but at least they did get rescued, and hopefully will recover well from their ordeal!
I Feel Possessed chapter 9 . 8/25/2017
This is an excellent story, full of tension, anguish and pain and brilliantly written, with all characters portrayed as in the show. If you are still active on ff and receiving the email notices of reviews etc., I hope at some point you can pull this together with one final chapter. Otherwise, at least you allowed Kensi and Callen to be rescued!
magdziara144 chapter 9 . 1/30/2017
It's been over 3 years now, pleeeeeeease finish the story
Petunia3116 chapter 9 . 11/21/2016
Loved this story! Only because Callen got his ass kicked! Don't get me wrong, I love my G Callen, love it when he gets his ass kicked but is put back together in the end! Will there be more to this story?
Anna Tanigaki Alves dos Santos chapter 1 . 10/31/2016
Please! Continue! :D
ssl71 chapter 9 . 9/18/2016
I hope you continue this fic with at least one more chapter.
IWroteWhat chapter 9 . 7/9/2016
Please finish the story! It's amazing!
WolfsongDarkforest chapter 9 . 7/21/2015
... Were you planning on finishing this? Like, ever?

Hint: this is me begging.
Bloodangel78 chapter 9 . 3/18/2015
I really hope you get a chance to finish this story up. I would love to know how this ends.
Jessica chapter 9 . 8/30/2014
Please update. Even just one last chapter.
Guest chapter 9 . 6/8/2014
I really LOVE this fic! Please please can you finish it?
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