Reviews for Strawberry Kisses, Raspberry Licks
SupremeQueenCosmic chapter 11 . 6/27
I’m so glad this finally got an end and honestly it was perfect. I mean sure the fallout sucked but in the end there was hope. And that’s all I really asked for. So I’m really happy. And I’m glad. Thank you so much for actually taking the time to listen to me and honestly reconsidering finishing this. I can’t even express how happy it makes me that there’s a pretty end. Spider web was and is honestly one of my favorites of yours.
The Queen of Plot Twists chapter 11 . 6/26
I knew I should’ve finished up my prompts first before reading this but I couldn’t help it! It was fantastic! Poor Yami he was due for a breakdown after being harassed by the paparazzi why the bell did the hospital even let them in there!?
This was very organic and realistic and I very much enjoyed it and Yugi is smart to have a plan B ;) college taught me that too! And I like how Yami was willing to leave for a bit and figure himself out but Yugi was right: it’s one thing to find yourself it’s another to run aaay and hide and in gkad that he has the support he needs and the he legitly wants to have a real relationship with Yugi.
This story was fantastic and it was very well done and mature take on this topic and I loved it! It was well worth the wait if the ending! Congrats on finishing it Whit! (Hugs!) I am so proud of you! (Also if you have free time at work feel free to check out my one shots and fics! They miss you!)
SupremeQueenCosmic chapter 10 . 6/25
BRUH SETO BE GIVING YAMI A WHOLE ASS HEART ATTACK WHAT IS THIS SHIT

I love it though. Please happy ending now. Sort of. they deserve it. Pleaseee
The Queen of Plot Twists chapter 10 . 6/23
Girl! You have no idea how happy this made me! I saw this and I was like oh my God she did it! And I almost died happy!
This was such a good chapter! It was really realistic and heartfelt and checked everything it needed and I actually liked Seto confronting Yugi the best: it was tough cause yeah Yugi was the “other man” but at the same time it was clear to Seto Yugi care about him more. I think Seto saw their relationship as the same abs it was when yami was an employee cept with more continent but no emotional attachment and that might’ve worked for him but Yami still. Such a Yugi is on the do-not here list. That certainly makes things more difficult but not impossible.
I loved his and Mokuba’s Talk though. It shows that even though things didn’t work out between him and Seto they can still be friends. Still poor Yami: cold of Seto to do all this while he’s recuperating and unable to defend himself..:
I was shocked by that heart attack he had at the end too! Damn guy is freaking scared as shut! Thank his rhe next chaonwikk be up in a few days (I’m holding you to that!) this is so good!
Guest chapter 9 . 1/5
Theses have been good stories. They only thing negative thing I have to say is I think spider web should be move to it own story since its way passed the (one shot adgenda)
The Queen of Plot Twists chapter 9 . 12/30/2019
I don’t know if I reviewed any of these but I am now! I’ve akways been a fan of the spider web series and I was happy this continued it! I loved it i was only a matter of time until seti found out and I’m glad Yami put his foot down cause yeah to Kaiba he’s just a possession I get Kaiba pissed no one likes to be cheated on but it’s a while ’’nother thing when they fall in love with someone else and if Mokuba is even in Yami’s side (he stole the show by the way) than Kaiba needs to wake up and realize Yami wasn’t the one who destroyed their marriage—he was just the first one to do something about it and that cliffhanger oh shut but now is when it’s really gonna day! Yami just got his by a car for god sake? How everyone will react is key! Yugi will doubtless be broken up and devastated but Seri? How will he feel and react? That is the question... I hope you continue these because it’s really good! And again Mokuba stoke the whole damn show!
ayelen rock chapter 9 . 12/30/2019
you will post this oneShot / fics in ao3?
SupremeQueenCosmic chapter 9 . 12/30/2019
EXCUSE ME. YAMI BETTER BE OKAY.
IN ALL PSYCHICAL ASPECTS.
Guest chapter 8 . 6/26/2016
Ooooh naughty naughty boys! Mwahahahaha I wonder how Kaiba is going to fair when he finds out his husband has a side piece!
winged sapphire wolf chapter 8 . 5/22/2016
Girls: Shit man *starts fanning selves*
Ashley: That was good~
Crystal: Very good~
Sapphire: More~
SupremeQueenCosmic chapter 8 . 5/22/2016
*cries* hallelujah!

Oh I so hope there will be more to this. Like them getting Caught by Kaiba or something dramatic. Seriously you should just make this into a beautiful lemon scented short story with how many parts it's already got and it's still pretty unconcluded but no matter! This was perfect I hope there's more!
thor94 chapter 8 . 5/21/2016
good chapter.
finally yami fucked yugi, hot. and in kaiba bedroom. lol!
YaoiLover7539 chapter 5 . 5/17/2016
what Yugi said about America is sad but true.
SupremeQueenCosmic chapter 7 . 5/14/2016
The spider web Mini series I guess you could call it or the four shot story would make an excellent short story. I would really like to know how it ended and if yami left Kaiba or what happens in the end cause we all know Yami and Yugi aren't gonna stay away from each other no matter how much they might want to.
Guest chapter 7 . 4/18/2016
This particular 3 shot would actually make an interesting short story. The puzzle/prideshipping one. In case this posts in general and not on the specific chapter
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