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can you do a lot of suzaku and euphie moments,please?

This is truly very interesting to read; please update soon

PS: Whose memories will Lelouch bring back from the past/future?

You should so continue this GORRAM AWESOME story. Team Kallulu Forever!

Hope for an update soon!

please next! chapter!

awesome story.

Good start but you got kallen completely ooc she knew what lelouch planned the minute she saw zero killing lelouch so the most cannon thing she should have done is slap him for not telling her and pushing her away

I think you have a very interesting idea going on here, so I'm interested. However, this was difficult to read. It moves quickly and the grammar is rather poor. I suggest getting a beta if you can; he or she should be able to help with a lot.

The chapter is too rushed; I understand that there's not much point to repeating canon scenes verbatim if they turn out the same, but that's evidently not the case. Considering how badly Clovis was losing before the Lancelot was deployed, I would imagine that Lelouch could have won the battle outright without its interference, even going so far to capture the G-1. Shouldn't such possible consequences be elaborated on? Saying "canon but no Lancelot" rings hollow; the outcome would have been much different, and the readers deserve to see this.

Also, there are numerous capitalization mistakes, e.g. "c.c." and sentence structures that contribute to the rushed feel and distract from the story.

Lastly, it's a pet peeve of mine when I see people including author's notes in the middle of the text; it needlessly interrupts the flow of the story and momentarily breaks the reader's immersion in it. Either put your authors notes at the beginning or the end of the chapter.

I say all of this to provide constructive criticism and help you improve as a writer.

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

everthing is good but you got kallen wrong she knew what lelouch and suzuko were doing the moment it happened so she wouldn't be trying to kill lelouch maybe slap him but that it but besides that everything is good