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DUDE, I almost want this to keep going and Sasuke to tease Kiba and stuff. This was awesome.

Yesss I am delivered. Damn I loved this Sasuke he knows what he’s doing and is proud ;) great fic!

Man I just re read this story because it weirdly popped into my head at work and I forgot how much I loved it. And how much I wish there was another chapter! Haha

Cuteeee (highkey want a sequel T_T)

Shiiiiiittt this is so good. Im not into first person view but this is great! This is the first one I'm so into. And like, this is basically 4 chapters of one "scene" but you expand it so well and it doesn't feel dragged out or prolonged in anyway, on the contrary I just keep wanting to read more! Excellent job, and very well organised to make a detailed scene so captivating!

Awww...
How i love flustered naruto~
Keep the good work...

Wow I loved this story soo much! But I swear to god I almost cried seeing that it was the last chapter and by the looks of it there is no sequel of some sort
But nonetheless I really enjoyed all the yaoiness and and all!

Excellent work! A slutty, sexy Sasuke, a Naruto with the confidence to go for it, Kiba as the straight, straight man and Ino as the love guru hooker. Simply wonderful characterizations. Thanks for writing.

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT! 3 THIS STORY WAS SHORT BUT ON POINT AND HOW FUNNY WAS NARUTO WHEN HE WAS NOT SURE IF HE LIKE SASUKE THAT WAY.
KUDOS TO THIS STORY YOU NAILED IT!
TAKE CARE

At first i didn't think i would like this story very much but damn it's an awesome story, good work.

I'm enjoying this very much, thank you

I love this story! Please can you give me a sequel or even just another chapter or something?

I love Ino. She's the best prostitute ever. Great story. You have an awesome way with words.

Okay, so I rarely review short stories, but this one left such a deep impression on me that I couldn't resist. I think the way you developed these characters was absolutely amazing. I was so in tune with Naruto that I found myself nodding in agreement to certain aspects of his thoughts/words. You're writing pulled me in so completely that I found myself re-reading certain paragraphs in hopes that it would make the story last longer. (I will admit my perverted brain went over the sex scene quite a lot, and DAMN! you are fantastic at that!) All in all, this has definitely made me a lot more happy, and I will /definitely/ be coming back to it.